Lauren Spieller
Literary Agent
Triada US Literary Agency
Literary Agent @TriadaUS | Author of Books for Young Adults | Check my website for book info & query status. I love dogs like it's my job. She/Her

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After you sign with an agent, your needs and wants might change. If that happens, DO NOT PANIC. It just means you need to talk to the agent and find out if they're able to adapt to these changes. If so, GREAT. That is the dream. If not, then it's time to move on. #querytip

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Writers--when looking for an agent, it's really important to assess *your needs and wants* in addition to what sort of book the agent is looking for. It's hard to know the answer up front, but talking to agented authors is a good place to start. #querytip

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I'm not sure when exactly, but I'll be closing to queries at some point this summer. Likely late June/early July. Just a heads up. #QueryTip

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Danai is querying The Red Candle đ„đŻđ đ @Danaiwrites
@laurenspieller Thank you for doing this! If a book is part 1 of a fully fleshed out series, would you like to learn a bit more about the series in the query?Nope, keep the focus on this book, and add "with series potential" at some point in the query #querytip

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#querytip When it comes to your pitch, keep it to the point, but don't leave out crucial information. The way to tell if you've done this? Share the pitch with someone who HASN'T read the book, and have them tell you if it makes sense.

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#querytip: comp titles MUST be recent and relevant. RECENT. AND. RELEVANT. I also STRONGLY urge you to include at least one *book* that is in your genre, published within 2-5 years ago.

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#querytip: If you've written a big 'world might end' type book, then your stakes should have two levels: yes, the fact that the world might end, but ALSO (and arguably more importantly...) what is at stake FOR YOUR CHARACTER?

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Lauren says GET VACCINATED @laurenspieller
Lunch break #askagent! Anyone got any questions? In the meantime, here's a thread of #querytips!#Querytip: be clear about what you protagonist WANTS. It's not enough to know what happens to them. I need to know who they are and what they want so that I can appreciate what is DRIVING the story (hint: it should be your character!)

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#QueryTip: check your spam. I've noticed that my replies--requests and rejections--are occasionally not received, which creates confusion and angst! Make sure you're checking your spam at least once a week!

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I see lots of MG novels that are seemingly about a series of developmental/familial conflicts instead of a central conflict. I understand that friendship break ups and periods and divorce are all important at that age, but I still need you to tell me what the HOOK is. #querytip

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Query Donâts:
âinsult other books
âsay your book defies genre
âuse negative self talk
âignore guidelines
Query Doâs:
âGive us the hook/high concept pitch
âShow your summary to someone who hasnât read the book
âsend it to agents individually
âwrite another book!
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Don't give away the ending of your book in a query. Especially not in the very first line of the email. đ #querytip #triadatip

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Writers: if an agent is pressuring you to sign with them and pull your book from other agents, think long and hard about why they are doing that and whether itâs in your best interest to do so *before* you agree. #querytip

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Iâve been receiving a lot of emails from writers (very politely!) requesting feedback, referrals, or explanations after Iâve passed on their query. I understand wanting these things but agents receive more than 30 queries a dayâwe unfortunately donât have time. #querytip

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Writersâ âcontemporaryâ and ârealisticâ are often used as synonyms when describing genre, but theyâre not. Ex: a realistic/real world novel set in 2002? Thatâs historical. (Gah I knowâwe are old! đ) #querytip

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#QueryTip! Donât query until you get feedback on your pitch from someone who is unfamiliar with your manuscript. They will be able to point out holes that are invisible to you/someone who has read the MS already. #Triadatip

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When you transition from one line to the next in your query summary/pitch, the relationship between those two lines is dictated by how your story unfolds ("But" vs "Therefore"). If you're not sure what I mean, I suggest watching this: youtube.com/watch?v=vGUNqq⊠#querytip

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Comp titles are there to help agents/editors see how a book will fit on shelves/into the CURRENT market, so itâs important that the ones you provide be both *relevant* and *recent* #querytip