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Kelly 📚 @LitAgentKelly · 30 Mar 2016

Good and interesting concept, but just. Not. Quite. There. The voice just isn't as prominent as I'd like it to be. #tenqueries #FindingMyOne

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Kelly 📚 @LitAgentKelly · 30 Mar 2016

I repeat: a manuscript with a MC that starts as 18 or older does not belong in the YA age range... #tenqueries #FindingMyOne

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Kelly 📚 @LitAgentKelly · 29 Mar 2016

Interesting concept, but just not quite grabbing me like I'd wish it to... #tenqueries #FindingMyOne

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Kelly 📚 @LitAgentKelly · 29 Mar 2016

*sigh* The amount of queries I've opened claiming to be YA, but the main character is in college or older... #tenqueries #FindingMyOne

Kelly 📚 @LitAgentKelly · 28 Mar 2016

Writing in first person is DIFFICULT. Make sure you vary your sentence structure, even more if not practiced! #tenqueries #FindingMyOne

Kelly 📚 @LitAgentKelly · 28 Mar 2016

Oy, so close, but just not quite there. A little too much description and not enough polish in the writing. #tenqueries #FindingMyOne

Kelly 📚 @LitAgentKelly · 28 Mar 2016

When querying, your manuscript should be polished to gold in your standards, without multiple spelling mistakes. #tenqueries #FindingMyOne

Kelly 📚 @LitAgentKelly · 28 Mar 2016

Be careful with your opening! Open with a bang, draw your readers in, then let the description trickle through. #tenqueries #FindingMyOne

Kelly 📚 @LitAgentKelly · 28 Mar 2016

Another one that just isn't the right fit. #tenqueries #FindingMyOne