Literary Agent at BookEnds, representing kidlit. Literary Mentor at Media Mentors. Query me at QueryMe.Online/1067
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BookEnds Literary Agency
Natascha Morris @SoCalledYALife · 2 May 2018
Charlotte Gruber @charlotteclg
For picture books: "Hi, My name is..." It is rare that that construction works.
For novels: Alot of info dumping right off the bat, but not in a way that helps the story.
#1st5pages #amwriting #amquerying
On showing vs telling (which should seem obvious, but this really clicked it for me):
Showing=details and specific. "The little red ball rolled down the large green hill and into the chicken yard."
Telling=generalizing. "The ball rolled into the yard." #1st5Pages #amwriting