A story that has no narrative keeps the reader from experiencing the story directly as we can never get close enough to the character. Similarly, a story that has almost no dialogue will cut the reader off from everything that occurs outside of the mind of the character. #subtips

Getting to know all those internal layers of a MC secures reader investment into the plight of the character. Experiencing the inner thoughts and emotions through the character's observations and reactions helps create a strong emotional pull. #subtips

should also reflect your character's personality...which makes finding your character's voice so important. While dialogue is great at showing how characters relate to one another, the narrative helps connect character to reader. #subtips

The same is true for your character. By showing how they respond and interact with each other, the reader should pick up on what their relationship looks like and means. Friend? Lover? Sworn enemy? Awkward acquaintance? Each relationship has its own unique language and

Dialogue depicts how one character connects to another character. We all have different ways we communicate depending on who we're with, what environment we're in, as well as how we *emotionally* respond to these things. #subtips

Remember when you’re considering an agent, it’s not the quantity of sales that matter but the quality that does. #pubtip #querytip

Right now I'm reading queries from 12/12/18 and requested manuscripts from 11/25/18. I've got 12 full requested manuscripts and about 250 queries. #querystats

Please do not call literary agency offices to follow up on your queries. For the love of Pete. #querytip

this is the best example of a story description i have ever seen #querytip obvi lolol

A few things I love seeing in a query:

1. Brevity
2. Twitter or IG handle
3. A hook that makes me swat whoever is sitting beside me (usually my husband) and say, “Listen to this!!!!!!!”
4. Info about you! Especially fun stuff that gives me a sense for your personality

#querytip

That’s so funny, because I’m getting all the queries with super high word counts. 😂🤷🏼‍♀️ Guys, even in adult high fantasies, I really don’t want to be reading a book longer than 130k words. I just don’t have that kind of time and I bet you can probably tighten it. #querytip

I love rule breakers, but if you break the rules of writing, you've got to do it well. Execution is key. #querytip

.@jamerrson is a huge believer in this! #querytip

Calling all writers: check out #AgeoftheStoryteller, a free webinar launching January 8 from @AuthorsGuild and @LisaWeinert! Agent Regina Brooks presents on Design Your Author Brand. Sign up here: age-of-the-storyteller.teachable.com #amwriting #MSWL #WriteTip #PubTip #QueryTip #AskAgent

Please, please do us a favor and put the manuscript name in the document title. I beg of you. #querytip

Spoilers are your friend when pitching to an editor. If there's a juicy twist, tell me all about it. Don't tease like you would in marketing copy.

Does the villain turn out to be the hero's secret twin brother? Then say that rather than alluding to vague family secrets.
#pubtip

Writers, please read and follow guidelines. Mine clearly state that attachments are not accepted. If you don't get a reply to your query, that's why #querytip My guidelines: jdlit.com/marie-lamba

#subtip #querytip - your very short novel about a college aged protagonist is :::probably::: not for middle grade, which is an age category for readers aged 8-12. It's very important to do your research, friends.

Monthly reminder. Unsolicited quieres sent to my email will be deleted unread. It’s in your best interest to follow my submission guidelines. My form is set up to organize my response time, so you get an answer in a timely manner. #querytip

Dunham Literary is back open to queries! Send your query letter and first five pages to query@dunhamlit.com . No attachments, please!
#newyear #querytip