Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Briston Brooks lol @briston_brooks

@kaitylynne13 What factors play into you offering an R&R vs a rejection? #askagent
Replying to @briston_brooks

Yay! If I love the story and truly fall into the characters or concept, and I see a lot of potential in the writer's style or vision, I offer an R&R. It's not often. Usually, it's because I loved it but there's too much editing to be done before it's truly ready #askagent

Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Zan Lowell is querying @zanlowell

@kaitylynne13 I've seen some agents say they are willing to take a second look at revised queries as long as there are significant enough changes. Of course this is all subjective, but any insight on how to gauge if your revisions are significant enough? Is there also x amount of time to wait?
Replying to @zanlowell

This means there needs to be a deep edit. Either the storyline is completely revamped, the characters plot/motivations are far more fleshed out, or the setting is much more vivid/reworked. It should definitely be recognizable in your hook, but (1/2) #askagent

Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Spencer Orey @spencerorey

@kaitylynne13 Hi! I've seen a lot of agents working through their email backlog for the end of the year.

Assuming that the novel is in the best shape possible, is there a best time of the year to query?
Replying to @spencerorey

There's not a tried and true date, but usually agents close their boxes toward the end of the year so they can catch up. Then, in Jan/Feb, they reopen and a waterfall of queries come in. I'd suggest either then or mid-year, but it really just depends on the agent #askagent

Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Kara Seal @KRwriter

@kaitylynne13 Your MSWL mentions you're looking for both historical and fantasy in MG. Does historical fantasy also fall under your interests? 😄 #askagent
Replying to @KRwriter

Yes! I would love to see Historical Fantasy in all ages. Something immersive and unique that I can't put down. Preferably not in settings/perspectives already saturating the market ❤️ #askagent

Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Tara Santora (they/them) @Tara_Santora

@kaitylynne13 What level of personalization is best in a query letter, assuming you have no connection to the agent? #askagent
Replying to @Tara_Santora

If you have no connection to the agent, it's fine to simply say "I believe my Genre/Age title would be a great fit for your list." However, it's great to mention if you saw them tweet a certain MSWL or if you've followed them on social media, etc. #askagent

Jess Dallow
@jldallow
Literary Agent
new yorker. associate literary agent at @browerliterary & cat sitter. she/her. opinions & tweets are my own. 💗💜💙
142 MSWL
26 AskAgent
9 Tips

David Clark @Ricevillage

@jldallow How often is a query pitch attention-getting enough to ask for the full?

There's no percentage or anything. If you write a good query and aren't show-boating yourself or your story, and it sounds like something I want, I request. All you really need to do is describe your story in the best way possible. #askagent

Jess Dallow
@jldallow
Literary Agent
new yorker. associate literary agent at @browerliterary & cat sitter. she/her. opinions & tweets are my own. 💗💜💙
142 MSWL
26 AskAgent
9 Tips
Jess Dallow
@jldallow
Literary Agent
new yorker. associate literary agent at @browerliterary & cat sitter. she/her. opinions & tweets are my own. 💗💜💙
142 MSWL
26 AskAgent
9 Tips

Maile Marriott @BurnettMaile

@jldallow Is there room in today's market for books aimed at an age category different from the age of the MC? I.e., many fairytales have adult characters, but are for younger audiences?

It's difficult, but it's not impossible. There are books with a younger character as the MC that is written for adults. The best advice is to see what the comps are and where they sit on the bookshelf. That's the best way to see if it can work. #askagent

Jess Dallow
@jldallow
Literary Agent
new yorker. associate literary agent at @browerliterary & cat sitter. she/her. opinions & tweets are my own. 💗💜💙
142 MSWL
26 AskAgent
9 Tips

madeline dau @Madeline_Dau

@jldallow Is it better to nudge or just write it off if it's been over 8 weeks since a query (assuming on the website they say they respond to every query)?

If an agent responds to every query & you have followed the submission instructions, it's most likely they just haven't gotten to it yet. Queries can sit for months, depending on work load. If (& only if) they respond to all, you can nudge, but I'd wait a little longer. #askagent

Jess Dallow
@jldallow
Literary Agent
new yorker. associate literary agent at @browerliterary & cat sitter. she/her. opinions & tweets are my own. 💗💜💙
142 MSWL
26 AskAgent
9 Tips

Darlene P. Campos 🇺🇸🇪🇨 @DarleneCampos91

@jldallow Is there ever a time to just quit querying an MS completely?

That is something I can't answer for you because it's so personal. If you're not getting reads, ask yourself why? Have other writers read it. Get feedback. The best resource writers have is other writers. Utilize them. #askagent

Jess Dallow
@jldallow
Literary Agent
new yorker. associate literary agent at @browerliterary & cat sitter. she/her. opinions & tweets are my own. 💗💜💙
142 MSWL
26 AskAgent
9 Tips

Doug Huse @dhuse42

@jldallow Is it easy to tell if an editor has gone over a writer's query letter, synopsis, and ms? Or if writers do that on their own does that show?

It's not necessarily easy, although all 3 things should be *ready* for querying. Your query should be 2-3 paragraphs that tell your story in an interesting way. Your synopsis should be around 2 pages with all details. Your MS should have been read by beta readers. #askagent

Jess Dallow
@jldallow
Literary Agent
new yorker. associate literary agent at @browerliterary & cat sitter. she/her. opinions & tweets are my own. 💗💜💙
142 MSWL
26 AskAgent
9 Tips
Jess Dallow
@jldallow
Literary Agent
new yorker. associate literary agent at @browerliterary & cat sitter. she/her. opinions & tweets are my own. 💗💜💙
142 MSWL
26 AskAgent
9 Tips
Jess Dallow
@jldallow
Literary Agent
new yorker. associate literary agent at @browerliterary & cat sitter. she/her. opinions & tweets are my own. 💗💜💙
142 MSWL
26 AskAgent
9 Tips

Michelle Lindo Rice @mlindorice

@jldallow I have written a couple books where the main character dies in the end. But what about when a main character dies earlier in the story? #askagent

If the main character dies earlier in the story, then who continues the story from there? Is it a dual POV? Is the person who is dying *really* the main character? If it's necessary to the story, then it sounds like the MC is the person who has to survive in their wake. #askagent

Jess Dallow
@jldallow
Literary Agent
new yorker. associate literary agent at @browerliterary & cat sitter. she/her. opinions & tweets are my own. 💗💜💙
142 MSWL
26 AskAgent
9 Tips

Al Riney writes about Cats! @riney_al

@jldallow #askagent
Do you think publicists are worth the money for a 1st time book deal? I have no website yet (need one I know) and a thin social media presence. I really believe my book is good, so I want it to have as much attention as possible.

Do you have the book deal already? Or are you querying? If you have self-published & you have the money to do it, it does help to have someone promote it. If you're just going out on submission, it is absolutely not necessary. #askagent

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
208 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips
Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
208 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

KFair Writes @kfairwrites

@msmariavicente Do you have any pet peeves when it comes to NF proposals?

I'm working (& working) on my first & every agency seems to have different guidelines, which requires a lot of tailoring. I don't mind that, but it's been difficult to reach the "I'm done" phase. #askagent
Replying to @kfairwrites

I would take NF proposal advice as guidelines to follow. They always look different depending on the topic. I don't have any pet peeves, but I do think many are missing the important information on why YOU should be the one to write the book.