Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

DMShepard, North of Normal Alaskan Tales @dmshepard13

@kaitylynne13 @trishwithapen Along those lines, I have read some queries where they want a synopsis with spoilers/indepth details. How much is too much.
Replying to @dmshepard13

I say 1pg single spaced or 2pgs double spaced. Give beginning, middle, end but we don't need subplots or character motivation/emotion explained. It can be dry and to the point, as long as we know the major plot steps #askagent

Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

John Marx @poppamarx

@kaitylynne13 Hi Kaitlyn. I've chopped my fantasy down by >35K words. Much leaner and cleaner. Almost ready to begin querying again. Is 119K too big for a first time author? What do you consider an "ideal" length for adult fantasy in today's market? Thanks for taking time to field questions!
Replying to @poppamarx

That's not necessarily too long! If hte concept is super intriguing and pulls reader in, 119k may not feel so long AND could be edited down further by an agent. I've deff seen well done adult fantasy that lenght (YA, though, that's a bit too long) #askagent

Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Zan Lowell is querying @zanlowell

@kaitylynne13 Sorry, quick followup. Does the query letter get formulated any differently?
Replying to @zanlowell

Nope. You can mention you did a deep revision, but the query should remain the same, minus what you change for the new book version details #askagent

Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Laurie Smith Murphy @LSmithMurphy

@kaitylynne13 Beginnings are the hardest part for me. What suggestions can you give?
Replying to @LSmithMurphy

Give us something that introduces the character, lets us get to know their personality a bit, but also has the conflict/challenge that propels us into the main plot. Fantasy ex: chased by guards who burn house down = revenge storyline. #askagent (1/2)

Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Angie McCullagh @AngieHiSeattle

@kaitylynne13 I was told by an agent not to set a novel (women's upmarket) in any time between WWII and now unless the story HAS to be set in that particular decade. My current WIP takes place in grunge-era Seattle ('92) because I like the setting and lack of tech. What do you think? #askagent
Replying to @AngieHiSeattle

I don't think that applies to all novels. Some plots can be wonderful in diff time periods, even if they're not IMPERATIVE to that setting. Not every book has to be set in a certain time because of the event happening then. Personally, I love to see historical #askagent (1/2)

Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Donna is looking forward to 2020 @PIXY727

@kaitylynne13 What’s the best time of year to query an agent? Is there one? Is there a bad time?
Replying to @PIXY727

The only time I'd be careful is toward end of year when most agents close their boxes to catch up. Be sure to research the agent to be certain they're currently open to queries #askagent

Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

sarah 👑 @sarahemasek

@kaitylynne13 Can you resubmit a manuscript to an agent who rejected you if you've made revisions? I've heard some say that that's taboo, but others say it's okay, as long as you emphasize the revisions. #askagent
Replying to @sarahemasek

If you've made significant revisions (like a very deep rewrite) you sometimes can, or if the agent offered to take another look after revising. Some agents prefer you to not, though, so be sure to research. #askagent

Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

KellyLKC @KellyLKC

@kaitylynne13 Should we specify upper MG in a query? What IS too long for that genre (fantasy) anyway?
Replying to @KellyLKC

You don't have to, though I like to see it mentioned when it's got a more mature tone/intended for older MG audience. Fantasy depends on age. For MG, I wouldn't go over 70k; for YA it's looking more around 100-110k, and Adult is around 110k/120k #askagent

Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Brett Linley @BLinleyAuthor

@kaitylynne13 What makes you automatically stop reading through the material someone submits with their query (if anything)?
Replying to @BLinleyAuthor

If it's something I don't rep or have said I don't read (rape, abuse, etc. on my profile). Also, if it's obvs problematic (racist, sexist, etc.). Those are big immediate no's. But others include no firm hook or overplayed storyline, too #askagent

Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

dmw_writer @dmw_writer

@kaitylynne13 Hi Kaitlyn, are traditional email/website queries the best first approach to an agent, or do you think things like conference pitch sessions, twitter pitches etc. work better?
Replying to @dmw_writer

Depends what works best for you. Traditional queries work, but so do conferences and pitch contests. Why not utilize all? If you're querying, there's no harm in also entering contests or attending conference one-on-ones. #askagent

Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

merry trishmas @trishwithapen

@kaitylynne13 What are you looking for in a synopsis?
Replying to @trishwithapen

Beginning, middle, end, and short bits on how they all link together. It can be dry. It doesn't have to be exciting as long as I am told the main plot points in the book. No subplots/motivations/emotions #askagent

Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Kristi McManus 🛫 @kristimcmanus

@kaitylynne13 What is your opinion on HOW to start a story? Some say in the middle of the action, others say build a rapport between your reader and your MC.
#askagent
Replying to @kristimcmanus

It's kind of a blend of both. I love in the midst of a scene, but that can be action-packed or subtle. It doesn't always have to be explosive. But it should introduce us to the character and the conflict/challenge that propels us into the true plot #askagent

Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Mackenzie Reed @mackenziemreed7

@kaitylynne13 Hello! Do agents mind if an author is interested in writing more than one genre? Say they sign with a thriller but also want to write fantasy or something else in the future?
Replying to @mackenziemreed7

Dependent on agent. If an agent offers you rep, tell them you plan to write other genres/ages and ask if that works with them. If not, they may not be the agent for you #askagent I personally don't mind =]

Kaitlyn Katsoupis
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
290 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips