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DMShepard, North of Normal Alaskan Tales @dmshepard13
@kaitylynne13 @buttonjar1 Similar question. What if you have multiple manuscripts (same or different genre) and get an offer on one while others are being reviewed. What's the etiquette on that?You can still notify the agents who have any of your works. Clarify it's for a separate work than what they hold and ask if they'd like the chance to review it before you sign a contract #askagent

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DMShepard, North of Normal Alaskan Tales @dmshepard13
@kaitylynne13 @trishwithapen Along those lines, I have read some queries where they want a synopsis with spoilers/indepth details. How much is too much.I say 1pg single spaced or 2pgs double spaced. Give beginning, middle, end but we don't need subplots or character motivation/emotion explained. It can be dry and to the point, as long as we know the major plot steps #askagent

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Elise Scott 🏳️🌈 @buttonjar1
@kaitylynne13 If you have fulls out to agents, then get an offer from a small (not vanity/hybrid) publisher, should you contact the agents to let them know?Definitely. You can tell the publisher you need to notify agents first before signing anything. Then tell every agent who has your query, partial, or full #askagent

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John Marx @poppamarx
@kaitylynne13 Hi Kaitlyn. I've chopped my fantasy down by >35K words. Much leaner and cleaner. Almost ready to begin querying again. Is 119K too big for a first time author? What do you consider an "ideal" length for adult fantasy in today's market? Thanks for taking time to field questions!That's not necessarily too long! If hte concept is super intriguing and pulls reader in, 119k may not feel so long AND could be edited down further by an agent. I've deff seen well done adult fantasy that lenght (YA, though, that's a bit too long) #askagent

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Zan Lowell is querying @zanlowell
@kaitylynne13 Sorry, quick followup. Does the query letter get formulated any differently?Nope. You can mention you did a deep revision, but the query should remain the same, minus what you change for the new book version details #askagent

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Kaitlyn Johnson - Closed to Queries @kaitylynne13
@LSmithMurphy Give us something that introduces the character, lets us get to know their personality a bit, but also has the conflict/challenge that propels us into the main plot. Fantasy ex: chased by guards who burn house down = revenge storyline. #askagent (1/2)Contemporary ex: In class w/ friend, kid pulls prank that embarrasses MC = reasoning for plan to save rep or to change situation #askagent (2/2)

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Laurie Smith Murphy @LSmithMurphy
@kaitylynne13 Beginnings are the hardest part for me. What suggestions can you give?Give us something that introduces the character, lets us get to know their personality a bit, but also has the conflict/challenge that propels us into the main plot. Fantasy ex: chased by guards who burn house down = revenge storyline. #askagent (1/2)

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Kaitlyn Johnson - Closed to Queries @kaitylynne13
@AngieHiSeattle I don't think that applies to all novels. Some plots can be wonderful in diff time periods, even if they're not IMPERATIVE to that setting. Not every book has to be set in a certain time because of the event happening then. Personally, I love to see historical #askagent (1/2)that just gives me a great story and the plot is interwoven with the time period, not necessarily dependent on it #askagent (2/2)

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Angie McCullagh @AngieHiSeattle
@kaitylynne13 I was told by an agent not to set a novel (women's upmarket) in any time between WWII and now unless the story HAS to be set in that particular decade. My current WIP takes place in grunge-era Seattle ('92) because I like the setting and lack of tech. What do you think? #askagentI don't think that applies to all novels. Some plots can be wonderful in diff time periods, even if they're not IMPERATIVE to that setting. Not every book has to be set in a certain time because of the event happening then. Personally, I love to see historical #askagent (1/2)

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Laurie Smith Murphy @LSmithMurphy
@kaitylynne13 If you've done a full rewrite of your story, is it okay to query agents again that were interested in it before, but not enough to sign you on?Yes! If you've done a deep revision, feel free to re-submit and state that in the query #askagent

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sarah 👑 @sarahemasek
@kaitylynne13 Can you resubmit a manuscript to an agent who rejected you if you've made revisions? I've heard some say that that's taboo, but others say it's okay, as long as you emphasize the revisions. #askagentIf you've made significant revisions (like a very deep rewrite) you sometimes can, or if the agent offered to take another look after revising. Some agents prefer you to not, though, so be sure to research. #askagent

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Kaitlyn Johnson - Closed to Queries @kaitylynne13
@KellyLKC You don't have to, though I like to see it mentioned when it's got a more mature tone/intended for older MG audience. Fantasy depends on age. For MG, I wouldn't go over 70k; for YA it's looking more around 100-110k, and Adult is around 110k/120k #askagentKeep in mind, this is for debut. If you're pre-published, you may be able to get away with over the YA/A limit. #askagent

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Brett Linley @BLinleyAuthor
@kaitylynne13 What makes you automatically stop reading through the material someone submits with their query (if anything)?If it's something I don't rep or have said I don't read (rape, abuse, etc. on my profile). Also, if it's obvs problematic (racist, sexist, etc.). Those are big immediate no's. But others include no firm hook or overplayed storyline, too #askagent

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dmw_writer @dmw_writer
@kaitylynne13 Hi Kaitlyn, are traditional email/website queries the best first approach to an agent, or do you think things like conference pitch sessions, twitter pitches etc. work better?Depends what works best for you. Traditional queries work, but so do conferences and pitch contests. Why not utilize all? If you're querying, there's no harm in also entering contests or attending conference one-on-ones. #askagent

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merry trishmas @trishwithapen
@kaitylynne13 What are you looking for in a synopsis?Beginning, middle, end, and short bits on how they all link together. It can be dry. It doesn't have to be exciting as long as I am told the main plot points in the book. No subplots/motivations/emotions #askagent

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Kristi McManus 🛫 @kristimcmanus
@kaitylynne13 What is your opinion on HOW to start a story? Some say in the middle of the action, others say build a rapport between your reader and your MC.#askagent
It's kind of a blend of both. I love in the midst of a scene, but that can be action-packed or subtle. It doesn't always have to be explosive. But it should introduce us to the character and the conflict/challenge that propels us into the true plot #askagent

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Mackenzie Reed @mackenziemreed7
@kaitylynne13 Hello! Do agents mind if an author is interested in writing more than one genre? Say they sign with a thriller but also want to write fantasy or something else in the future?Dependent on agent. If an agent offers you rep, tell them you plan to write other genres/ages and ask if that works with them. If not, they may not be the agent for you #askagent I personally don't mind =]

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Kristi McManus 🛫 @kristimcmanus
@kaitylynne13 What is the standard wait time for response on a full? An agent requested a full at a conference in july, but I havent received a decision. I nudged about a month ago with no response. #askagentDefinitely dependent on the agent. I always say to check in every 3 months, regardless if they respond or not. I've known some agents to take quite a long time (and we're so sorry!) #askagent
