Jordy Albert

Q2: Genre isn't specific. Query is a bit vague, and the premise isn't really for me. Pass #tenqueries

Q1: MG. Premise isn't really my cup of tea. Pass #tenqueries.

Q10: YA/NA historical. Really long. The pacing a bit slow. Pass. #tenqueries

Q9: 2/2 a specific narrator (MC) to connect with. Pass. #tenqueries

Q8: No query (no introduction). Links to Amazon. Pass. #tenqueries.

Q7: Didn't follow submission guidelines (sent attachment--no introduction. or query). Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: YA (fantasty? Sci-fi?). I think there's too much telling in the opening pages. Pass. #tenqueries

Q5: No query, and isn't addressed to one of our agents :/ Pass. #tenqueries

Q4: YA urban fantasy. Query didn't really give me a good idea about the story. Opening was a little cliche. Pass. #tenqueries

Q3: Romance/erotica. Premise isn't for me. Pass #tenqueries

Q2: YA fantasy. A bit on the long side, premise seems a bit familiar, and I didn't connect with the pages. Pass #tenqueries

Q1: The premise is too familiar. I don't feel the pages begin at the right place. Pass. #tenqueries

Q10: MG adventure. Unfortunately, premise isn't really for me. Pass #tenqueries

Q9: Genre not specified. Didn't follow submission guidelines-no sample pages. Pass #tenqueries

Q8: Murder/Mystery. This isn't really my preferred genre. Query doesn't give me a good sense of plot. Pass #tenqueries

Q7: Fantasy. Query was difficult to follow, and I didn't feel I got a good sense of the MC in the opening pages. Pass #tenqueries

Q6:Romance(?) Unfortunately, I didn't connect with the premise. I also felt there was too much telling in the pages. Pass #tenqueries

Q5: Historical. Premise isn’t really for me. Opening pages are a bit difficult to follow. Pass #tenqueries

Q4: Historical romance. Opening pages were a bit slow, and I wasn’t drawn into the story. Pass #tenqueries

Q3: Fantasy. Query isn’t very clear, so I’m not sure what the story is about. Pass #tenqueries