Jordy Albert

Q10: Query has lots of background info. But nothing about the story really. Pass. #tenqueries

Q9: Didn't follow guidelines. Query doesn't really say anything about the story. Pass. #tenqueries

Q8: YA fantasy. Premise sounds familiar. Pass. #tenqueries

Q7: No query. Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: No query :( ...I think I've seen this submission before. Pass. #tenqueries

Q5: The premise just isn't for me. Pass. #tenqueries

Q4: NA. Query is a bit confusing. I didn't care for the voice. Pass. #tenqueries

Q3: YA Contemporary. Query (not bad) maybe goes into too much detail. Didn't connect with character though. Pass. #tenqueries

Q2: No query really...sent a couple chapters as attachment. Please no attachments unless requested. Pass. #tenqueries

Q1: Didn't follow guidelines (the author just sent an email asking if s/he can query). Pass. #tenqueries

Q10: fantasy...I wasn't sold on the premise, and I felt it was difficult to get grounded in the pages. Pass #tenqueries

Q9 : adventure/fantasy...didn't love the premise, and the opening pages seemed a bit cliche. Pass. #tenqueries

Q8: MG fantasy(?)...opening pages had a lot of telling; didn't love the voice. Pass. #tenqueries

Q7: YA...Premise isn't for me. Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: Didn't follow guidelines...no query :/ Pass. #tenqueries

Q5: YA...premise isn't for me. Pass. #tenqueries

Q4: YA Contemporary(?). Premise isn't really for me, and the opening pages are a bit slow. Pass. #tenqueries

Q3: Sci-fi. The query was really vague, and I didn't get drawn into the pages. Pass. #tenqueries

Q2: Sci-fi/thriller. Didn't follow guidelines (no query/pages). Pass #tenqueries

Q1:YA Fantasy (alt. history). Interesting concept, but the pages were tough to follow. Pass. #tenqueries