Jordy Albert

Q2: MG. Action began almost right away, so it was tough to get invested. Pass. #tenqueries

Q1: YA? Not sure of the genre, and it's really short. No sample pages included :/ Pass. #tenqueries

Q10: Premise seems a bit too similar to other titles out there. And the word count is really long. Pass. #tenqueries

Q9: Not sure what this book is about, and the query is in second person/pages in 3rd. It's better to be consistent. Pass. #tenqueries

Q8: Thriller (YA?). The premise isn't really my cup of tea. Pass. #tenqueries

Q7: Fantasy(?). Query is a bit vague, and I wasn't invested in the pages. Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: Query doesn't really say anything about the story. I didn't really love the pages. Pass. #tenqueries

Q5: NA (fantasy?). I didn't connect with the pages; there was a bit of info-dumping, which slowed the pacing. Pass. #tenqueries

Q4: YA (fantasy?). I didn't really connect with the voice. Pass. #tenqueries

Q3: YA? I don't think I'd be able to empathize with the protagonist(s). Pass. #tenqueries

Q2: No query :( Pass. #tenqueries

Q1: Romance. Premise doesn't really sound like my cup of tea. Pass. #tenqueries

Q10: YA. I empathize w/the character but the voice didn't ring authentic for me. Pass. #tenqueries

Q9: I like time travel, but query was a bit confusing, and I wasn't 100% sold on premise. Pass. #tenqueries

Q8: MG fantasy. Lots of telling, info-dumping and a bit wordy. Pass. #tenqueries

Q7: YA fantasy. Voice/dialogue felt a bit overdramatic. Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: MG (fantasy). I didn't really become invested in the pages. Pass. #tenqueries

Q5: Romantic thriller. I didn't really connect with the pages. Not 100% on the premise. Pass. #tenqueries

Q4: historical fiction. Premise isn't really my cup of tea, and there are no sample pages. Pass. #tenqueries

Q3: YA fantasy. Query was a little confusing, and characters were difficult to emphasize with. Pass. #tenqueries