Jordy Albert

Q2: YA post-apocalyptic. Premise is really familiar. Pages go right into plot. Pass. #tenqueries

Q1: Sample pages sent as attachment :( Pass. #tenqueries

Q10: YA (retelling), pages didn't really pull me, quite a bit of telling. Pass #tenqueries

Q9: YA. There's a lot of backstory/info-dumping in the pages. Pass. #tenqueries

Q8: YA. I didn't really connect with the narrator. Pass. #tenqueries

Q7: Sent pages as attachment :( Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: fantasy/sci-fi. Query was a little difficult to follow, and the premise isn't really my cup of tea. Pass. #tenqueries

Q5: Contemporary Romance. Not 100% on the premise, pages aren't bad, but the pace seems a bit slow for me. Pass. #tenqueries

Q4: YA Contemporary. Premise isn't really for me. I didn't really relate to the narrator. Pass. #tenqueries

Q3: YA. Premise seems similar to other books out there. Pages didn't really pull me in. Pass. #tenqueries

Q2: YA paranormal. The premise isn't for me, and I felt there was a lot of telling in the voice. Pass #tenqueries

Q1: YA (contemporary?). The premise isn't really for me, also it was difficult to connect with the characters. Pass. #tenqueries

Q10: Not really my genre. Pass. #tenqueries

Q9: Romance (suspense-thriller). The query doesn't really say anything about the romance. Premise isn't really for me. Pass #tenqueries

Q8: Fantasy. Stakes/motives are bit unclear in query. I didn't connect with the voice. Pass #tenqueries

Q7: YA Fantasy. Chapters are rather short, and I didn't get a good sense of characters in opening pages. Pass #tenqueries

Q6: NA (paranormal?) romance. A bit long (might suggest cut by 1/2). Pages felt like there was a lot of telling. Pass #tenqueries

Q5: NA romance(?). I didn't really connect with the characters. Pass #tenqueries

Q4: NA (fantasy? dystopian?). Interesting title. I didn't become engaged in the pages-didn't really see a hook. Pass #tenqueries

Q3: YA. A little on the short side for YA. The premise is too dark. Pass #tenqueries