Jordy Albert

Q7: YA fantasy. Pacing didn’t feel consistent and I felt it was difficult to follow what was happening. Pass #tenqueries

Q6: YA UF. Lots of exposition and the pacing felt a bit rushed. Pass #tenqueries

Q5: Sci-fi? I don’t feel this project is a good fit for me. Pass #tenqueries

Q4: YA fantasy (dystopian). I liked the premise, but the pages just didn’t grab my attention. I felt the world bulding could use much more development. Pass #tenqueries

Q3: Romance. I felt the pages had a unique voice. Request #tenqueries

Q2: Fantasy. The first page didn’t really pull me in. I didn’t connect with the MC or voice. Pass #tenqueries

Q1: YA fantasy. The query doesn’t offer any information about the actual novel. Pages were included as attachments. Please always be sure to check agent guidelines when querying. Pass #tenqueries

Q10: ya contemporary. Pacing was a little slow. I often felt myself skimming the sample pages. Pass #tenqueries

Q9: fantasy, romance. I didn’t connect with the writing. The setting wasn’t clear and the narrator was confusing. Pass. #tenqueries

Q8: YA fantasy/sci fi. The opening pages were a little slow and didn’t immediately engage me. I did find the premise interesting. I’ll revisit this one. #tenqueries

Q7: YA fantasy. I didn’t connect with the voice and I’m not sure the premise is my cup of tea. Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: adult fantasy. The pages start in the middle of action, but the pacing feels slow and didn’t grab my attention. Pass #tenqueries

Q5: new adult. I didn’t connect with the writing. There’s a lot of exposition, but for me it just didn’t feel cohesive. Pass. #tenqueries

Q4: Non-fiction. I'm not really looking for non-fiction at this time. Definitely not my cup of tea. Pass #tenqueries

Q3; Adult fiction (?). The query didn't really talk about the novel, but mentioned other books by the author. The story goes right into action/plot, which didn't grab my attention. Pass #tenqueries

Q2: YA Epic (fantasy?). Just from the synopsis I can tell that this isn't my cup of tea. The opening pages had a lot telling v showing, and were confusing. Pass. #tenqueries

Q1: Historical Fiction. Please be sure to always check submission guidelines. We do not open any documents unless requested.

Q10: I’m not representing non-fiction at the moment. We do not open attachments unless requested. Pass #tenqueries

Q9: ya fantasy. The voice seemed a bit younger, more middle grade. Pass #tenqueries

Q8: YA fantasy. I think this one is too similar to books already on the market. Pass #tenqueries