Jordy Albert ๐Ÿ•Š

@bluedragonfly81

Literary Agent @BookerAlbertLit | Lover of dogs, books, and tea. Total fangirl. #worldpeace

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The Booker Albert Literary Agency

Jordy Albert ๐Ÿ•Š @bluedragonfly81 · 31 Jan 2019

Q10: ya contemporary. Pacing was a little slow. I often felt myself skimming the sample pages. Pass #tenqueries

Jordy Albert ๐Ÿ•Š @bluedragonfly81 · 31 Jan 2019

Q9: fantasy, romance. I didnโ€™t connect with the writing. The setting wasnโ€™t clear and the narrator was confusing. Pass. #tenqueries

Jordy Albert ๐Ÿ•Š @bluedragonfly81 · 30 Jan 2019

Q8: YA fantasy/sci fi. The opening pages were a little slow and didnโ€™t immediately engage me. I did find the premise interesting. Iโ€™ll revisit this one. #tenqueries

Jordy Albert ๐Ÿ•Š @bluedragonfly81 · 29 Jan 2019

Q7: YA fantasy. I didnโ€™t connect with the voice and Iโ€™m not sure the premise is my cup of tea. Pass. #tenqueries

Jordy Albert ๐Ÿ•Š @bluedragonfly81 · 29 Jan 2019

Q6: adult fantasy. The pages start in the middle of action, but the pacing feels slow and didnโ€™t grab my attention. Pass #tenqueries

Jordy Albert ๐Ÿ•Š @bluedragonfly81 · 29 Jan 2019

Q5: new adult. I didnโ€™t connect with the writing. Thereโ€™s a lot of exposition, but for me it just didnโ€™t feel cohesive. Pass. #tenqueries

Jordy Albert ๐Ÿ•Š @bluedragonfly81 · 29 Jan 2019

Q4: Non-fiction. I'm not really looking for non-fiction at this time. Definitely not my cup of tea. Pass #tenqueries

Jordy Albert ๐Ÿ•Š @bluedragonfly81 · 29 Jan 2019

Q3; Adult fiction (?). The query didn't really talk about the novel, but mentioned other books by the author. The story goes right into action/plot, which didn't grab my attention. Pass #tenqueries

Jordy Albert ๐Ÿ•Š @bluedragonfly81 · 29 Jan 2019

Q2: YA Epic (fantasy?). Just from the synopsis I can tell that this isn't my cup of tea. The opening pages had a lot telling v showing, and were confusing. Pass. #tenqueries

Jordy Albert ๐Ÿ•Š @bluedragonfly81 · 29 Jan 2019

Q1: Historical Fiction. Please be sure to always check submission guidelines. We do not open any documents unless requested.

Jordy Albert ๐Ÿ•Š @bluedragonfly81 · 30 Oct 2017

Q10: Iโ€™m not representing non-fiction at the moment. We do not open attachments unless requested. Pass #tenqueries

Jordy Albert ๐Ÿ•Š @bluedragonfly81 · 30 Oct 2017

Q9: ya fantasy. The voice seemed a bit younger, more middle grade. Pass #tenqueries

Jordy Albert ๐Ÿ•Š @bluedragonfly81 · 30 Oct 2017

Q8: YA fantasy. I think this one is too similar to books already on the market. Pass #tenqueries

Jordy Albert ๐Ÿ•Š @bluedragonfly81 · 30 Oct 2017

Q7: contemporary romance. I didnโ€™t connect with the main character. Pass #tenqueries

Jordy Albert ๐Ÿ•Š @bluedragonfly81 · 30 Oct 2017

Q6: Contemporary romance. I didnโ€™t connect with the writing and the premise wasnโ€™t really my cup of tea. Pass #tenqueries

Jordy Albert ๐Ÿ•Š @bluedragonfly81 · 30 Oct 2017

Q5: speculative. Prologue seems unnecessary-nothing really happened, and it felt disconnected from first chapter. Pass #tenqueries

Jordy Albert ๐Ÿ•Š @bluedragonfly81 · 30 Oct 2017

Q4: fantasy (longish). Voice felt detached, and the pacing was slow. Pass #tenqueries

Jordy Albert ๐Ÿ•Š @bluedragonfly81 · 30 Oct 2017

Q3: fantasy. Pages were confusing and the opening felt a bit clichรฉ. Pass #tenqueries

Jordy Albert ๐Ÿ•Š @bluedragonfly81 · 30 Oct 2017

Q2: MG or YA(?) I didnโ€™t care for the voice/writing. Pass #tenqueries

Jordy Albert ๐Ÿ•Š @bluedragonfly81 · 30 Oct 2017

Q1: historical, word count is waaaay too long. Premise isnโ€™t really for me. Pass #tenqueries