Jordy Albert

Q2: NA. MC seems a bit standoffish and the POV changes a bit abruptly. Pass. #tenqueries

Q1: MG mystery. Not really my genre, and the query doesn't really give me a clear picture about the story. Pass #tenqueries

Q10: Contemp. romance. Kind of a cute premise, but I wasn't really connecting with the main character. Pass. #tenqueries

Q9: YA/fantasy. Query is a bit vague. Some things feel a bit repetitive, and the pages feel somewhat disjointed. Pass. #tenqueries

Q8: Query not addressed to one of our agents (didn't follow submission guidelines) :/ Pass. #tenqueries

Q7: MG/contemp.(?). Premise isn't really for me...I also think the subject matter feels similar to other books. Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: MG/Fantasy.The voice doesn't feel authentic for MG. Premise isn't really for me. Pass. #tenqueries

Q5: Contemp. fic. w/rom. elements(?). Cliche opening. POV changes a few paragraphs in, so I wasn't grounded in the story. Pass #tenqueries

Q4: Fantasy(?). Premise isn't for me, and I didn't care for the voice. Pass. #tenqueries

Q3: Genre not clear. The query is a bit all over the place, so I'm not really sure what the story is about. Pass #tenqueries

Q2: YA. Premise not really for me. And really long for a YA (160K +) Pass #tenqueries

Q1: Query is a bit confusing. Also, 400k + is too, too long. #tenqueries

Q8-10: These queries, like a couple of others I already tweeted about, didn't follow guidelines. Pass :( #tenqueries

Q7: MG contemporary. The pages were a bit slow, so unfortunately didn't hold my interest. Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: MG. Didn't connect with the main characters. Pass. #tenqueries

Q5: Didn't follow guidelines. No sample pages. Pass. #tenqueries

Q4: Didn't follow guidelines. No query. Pass. #tenqueries

Q3: Query for poetry. I’m not representing poetry at this time. Pass. #tenqueries

Q2: YA/fantasy. Didn’t get caught up in the pages. Pass. #tenqueries

Q1: MG (fantasy?) Way too long. Could be about 4 MG books. Pass #tenqueries