Don't break the fourth wall. Don't do it. Do not break that wall. A thread. #writingtip #querytip

Breaking the fourth wall (having the MC speak directly to the reader) is a very difficult thing to do in writing and should only be used for specific themes and voices. 1/3

#querytip Thread
If you're going to use a comparable title that's epic (like Harry Potter, Hunger Games, Shadow and Bone), you're setting the agent up to have huge expectations.
If you must use that title...

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Point being — ALWAYS strike morality clauses. Or define them as best as possible. Though, in my experience, publishers are often okay with striking morality clauses because they’re infamously BS. #pubtip #contract

AFTER ALL morality is a social, cultural, personal thing. Besides, you know, illegal acts like stealing, murder, purposely running over a duck. #pubtip #contracts

The way many are written can be interpreted as John was involved in a twitter feud or received a speeding ticket — and the publisher can say “see you later!” #pubtip #contracts

Also, MORALTY CLAUSES! They may(?) *seem* like a reasonable thing. Like if Hachette buys your book and you murder your neighbor it makes sense they wouldn’t want to work with you. #pubtip #contracts #thread

Ghostwriting contracts are varied and weird. Usually they stipulate you receive no written or title credit. Some are for a flat fee, essentially a work-for-hire, and some granted a percentage of advances or royalties. #pubtip #contracts

Okay, so part of my job as an agent is to bring clients job opportunities. These can include ghostwriting projects, write-for-hires, mobile app stories, etc. All of these contracts are unique and provide different advantages. Obviously. #pubtip #contracts #thread

As for scripts (or prose) — saying something or showing us something ONCE is NOT enough. I don’t care what anyone says. Shakespeare said the audience needs to hear something three times before they “get” it. Lame shows/movies/books often forget that. #pubtip

Also, scratch all your pretty descriptions. Yes, show, don’t tell, but also don’t show us the way you would in a novel. Lane doesn’t “storm in, swinging his arms in a rage.” Lane “enters, upset.” Notice both these examples suck. #pubtip

Some notes. Dialogue is all about subtext. No one ever says what they mean. Sometimes — often? — people say the exact opposite. In novels we can show that through inflections, etc. However, in scripts that’s a no-no. It’s the actor’s job to intuit those things. #pubtip

I always explain a script to novelists as the bare bones of a book. The rub is a script is also a full story itself with a beginning, middle, and end. Don’t forget subtext, dialogue, themes, and motifs. #pubtip

Okay, some more thoughts re novelists/screenwriters. To go from prose to script is basically unlearning everything you’ve ever learned about writing. A script is only what the audience can SEE and hear. Nothing else. No inner monologue, no “little did s/he knows”. #pubtip

So, getting your book optioned is like Step 34 of Step 15,000. FYI. #pubtip

And if you think PUBLISHING is a slow-moving snail — ha — FILM often moves at the pace of a rock. There’s a saying that movies don’t get made. For everyone book-to-film on your screen there’s a thousand options that went NOWHERE... #pubtip

Legal (prod co, studio) or a producer will say, “Too much of a hassle” or “You’re crazy” and pass. There’s a lot of great material out there and u less your book is the THING it’s replaceable in “their” eyes. #pubtip

You might ask “Why? It’s my book!” Sure, true, but sometimes having an option TOO defined can torpedo the project. If the option states the actor portraying the protagonist must be Brad Pitt and BP doesn’t want to do the film. Boom. BUT #pubtip

...studio has to give you a first crack at writing the screenplay of your book. This means you write the script, submit it, and they have to consider it in good faith. An option will RARELY guarantee you get to write the script, again unless you’re Stephen King. #pubtip

Okay, back. So, a lot of novelists want to become screenwriters, and some screenwriters novelist. Two totally - opposite? - beasts. It’s VERY difficult to crossover unless you’re Stephen King or a big author. Though, you can negotiate in an option that producer, prod co, #pubtip

“Sell” the option to someone else — usually a studio or prod co. #pubtip #contracts