Ann Rose
@annmrose
Literary Agent
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Laura Bower is drafting ✨ @LauraMB2

@annmrose I always enjoy these, thank you!

Do you find value when an author mentions the *why* behind writing their book? I know this is another subjective opinion but I have left this out in my query letters in fear of clogging up space. #askaagent
Replying to @LauraMB2

I LOVE the why! Not all agents agree or do but for me I am interested in you the author and why this novel was important for you to write. The intention behind it feels so relevant to me so I always enjoy reading those tidbits

Ann Rose
@annmrose
Literary Agent
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Ann Rose
@annmrose
Literary Agent
agent: @TheTobiasAgency & #rosebudauthor wrangler | author: ROAD TO EUGENICA & BREAKOUT | opinions are my own | she/her rep:@evascalzo layout:@ana_scribe
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Nathan Wilson @natewilson0218

@annmrose Hi Ann! Thanks so much for these threads. Quick question: is it smart to mention your novel’s themes when querying, or is theme something the agent should be able to infer from your characters / plot pitch, therefore wasting words?
Replying to @natewilson0218

You will not get one answer on this that is the same I’m warning you now. I personally don’t mind seeing themes and the intention of the story from the author POV I personally find it interesting but some agents will say “I don’t need it” …

Ann Rose
@annmrose
Literary Agent
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Demi Michelle 🦋 @demimschwartz

@annmrose Hi :) do you have advice for a query letter for a book that has dual POV, where both characters get equal page time, alternating every other chapter?
Replying to @demimschwartz

It’s basically the same but you answer these questions for both MCs and show us how the stories hook together. Query Shark is an amazing reference if you are looking for examples.

Saskia Leach
@saskialeach_
Literary Assistant
📖 Agent’s Assistant at @KNLitAgency and Secretary of the AAA Bridge Committee 💬 "You chose looks. I chose books." 📚 #RespectRomFic
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Kate Nash
@katenashagent
Literary Agent
Literary agent.
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Ann Rose
@annmrose
Literary Agent
agent: @TheTobiasAgency & #rosebudauthor wrangler | author: ROAD TO EUGENICA & BREAKOUT | opinions are my own | she/her rep:@evascalzo layout:@ana_scribe
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Kristen @KEHawley

@annmrose Awesome thread. Thanks for your time! Question: any advice on working with freelance editors before querying agents? Too many cooks in the kitchen? Any great freelancers to recommend? Thanks!
Replying to @KEHawley

Deciding to work with an editor prior is a personal choice and I do believe that with a solid critque group (partner) no author needs to spend money to get an agent.

Ann Rose
@annmrose
Literary Agent
agent: @TheTobiasAgency & #rosebudauthor wrangler | author: ROAD TO EUGENICA & BREAKOUT | opinions are my own | she/her rep:@evascalzo layout:@ana_scribe
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Megan Lind Persinger @meganthebookwrm

@annmrose What happens if an agent doesn't like the next book you write?
Replying to @meganthebookwrm

For me. My clients and I have already talked about next projects so this isn't an issue.
No need for them to spin their wheels IMO

Ann Rose
@annmrose
Literary Agent
agent: @TheTobiasAgency & #rosebudauthor wrangler | author: ROAD TO EUGENICA & BREAKOUT | opinions are my own | she/her rep:@evascalzo layout:@ana_scribe
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elizabeth is not real @whenbethwrite

@annmrose What does “It’s not a fit for me” mean?
Replying to @whenbethwrite

It can mean anything from - I didn't connect to the voice to I already have something like this - it's really a catch all phrase, so not super helpful I know.

Ann Rose
@annmrose
Literary Agent
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Ann Rose
@annmrose
Literary Agent
agent: @TheTobiasAgency & #rosebudauthor wrangler | author: ROAD TO EUGENICA & BREAKOUT | opinions are my own | she/her rep:@evascalzo layout:@ana_scribe
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Savy Guthrie @SavyGuthrie

@annmrose I’m probably spending too much time analyzing query tracker, but why do agents skip around in their inbox? Are they looking for a particular genre? Does a title intrigue them?
Replying to @SavyGuthrie

There could be a lot of reasons. They are looking for certain things. They are holding on to look more closely at your project when they have more time to consider. There are some "easy" no's (like way out of word count my 300K word novel) to clear out.

Ann Rose
@annmrose
Literary Agent
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Ann Rose
@annmrose
Literary Agent
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Victor Drax @Victor_Drax

@annmrose Is it okay for your manuscript to start with a prologue? Should you query with the first chapter or the prologue?
Replying to @Victor_Drax

If you can query the book without the prologue and the story itself makes sense, I would question if you need the prologue at all

Ann Rose
@annmrose
Literary Agent
agent: @TheTobiasAgency & #rosebudauthor wrangler | author: ROAD TO EUGENICA & BREAKOUT | opinions are my own | she/her rep:@evascalzo layout:@ana_scribe
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Russell Epp-Leppel 💜💀 @leppeppel

@annmrose In my (admittedly limited) experience, creators and consumers alike love genre-blending, so why are the middlemen of producers and distributors so loathe to touch it!? 😮‍💨
Replying to @leppeppel

At the end of the day agents sell to publishers and if pubs aren't sure how to sell something that sits in the middle of things that makes it really hard for agents
Bookstores (the primary customer to publishers) only have so much shelf space. So it needs to firmly sit somewhere

Ann Rose
@annmrose
Literary Agent
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Ann Rose
@annmrose
Literary Agent
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Ann Rose
@annmrose
Literary Agent
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Ann Rose
@annmrose
Literary Agent
agent: @TheTobiasAgency & #rosebudauthor wrangler | author: ROAD TO EUGENICA & BREAKOUT | opinions are my own | she/her rep:@evascalzo layout:@ana_scribe
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Varsha Seshan @VarshaSeshan

@annmrose How long would you say it's appropriate to wait before following up on a full request?
Replying to @VarshaSeshan

3 months and then in 3 month increments there after
Don’t be surprised though if after 3 months they haven’t gotten to it

Ann Rose
@annmrose
Literary Agent
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Ann Rose
@annmrose
Literary Agent
agent: @TheTobiasAgency & #rosebudauthor wrangler | author: ROAD TO EUGENICA & BREAKOUT | opinions are my own | she/her rep:@evascalzo layout:@ana_scribe
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Renea Wrights @ReneaWrights

@annmrose If an author had an amazing plot, characters, settings, etc, but their writing skill was just ok. Do you sign them & work w/then or tell them 2 invest in an editor?
Replying to @ReneaWrights

I think there is more nuance here than can just be answered by a blanketed yes or no. I’ve signed books that have needed little work, I’ve also signed books that needed heavy revision and have been able to sell both kinds. Each situation is different.