Anne Tibbets
@AnneTibbets
Literary Agent
Literary Agent @MaassLitAgency . Author. SCREAMS FROM THE VOID out now. Opinions & sarcasm my own.
43 MSWL
127 AskAgent
5 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Armanis Ar-feinial(Author) @Sarcastic_elf

@RedPenKaitlyn Question: is there a time frame when you don't hear back from an agent that you should consider a pass on the project?
Replying to @Sarcastic_elf

I'd say a year. I know it's a lot! I suggest checking in after three months. Then again after two more months and so on. If no answers, assume a pass #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

E J McKenna is querying @EJMcKennaWrites

@RedPenKaitlyn What about the opening pages would make you stop reading?
Replying to @EJMcKennaWrites

Lots of telling language, where we aren't in the character's head/feeling like we're experiencing the story rather than being told a story.

I'm a person who likes intimacy with characters and loves the internal emotion/physical reaction added to make it 3D #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Chris Johns @creativeChrisJ

@RedPenKaitlyn Hi Kaitlyn, in a query letter, do put more stock in the brief synopsis of the book or the author's background and experience?
Replying to @creativeChrisJ

So, a synopsis is very different than a query, so be sure to research that. But I definitely put more consideration into your pitch than your bio. You do NOT need a super impressive bio! #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

M.Rose is writing @mayroundstone

@RedPenKaitlyn If you have a query letter that isn’t necessarily the greatest, how likely are you to read their work? I get that agents have a bazillion subs in their inbox and have to make quick decisions, I just wonder what might play a bigger role in your decision, pages or query letter?
Replying to @mayroundstone

I read pages unless it's 100% not a genre or elements of plot I don't represent (on screen rape, nonfiction, etc.). Many agents I know understand it's hard to write a query and we still consider at least your first page to gauge voice/style. #askagent it's usually a merge of both

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Arty⁉️🌹 @CuriousArtemis

@RedPenKaitlyn Should you even bother querying if your book is about 20k over the "generally accepted" word count for that genre (in this case YA fantasy - I've been leaning towards adult because of the word count issue!)
Replying to @CuriousArtemis

your best bet is to try to get it as close to 110k as possible. That's around where YA fantasy is right now (I often suggest shooting for 100k). If you're not too far off, an agent will be able to keep editing in mind and still be willing to work with you #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Dragonness Wyverna @DragonnessRawr

@RedPenKaitlyn How do you write a query for a boo with 2 authors? (Also, do you fill out a queryshark form for two authors?)
Replying to @DragonnessRawr

often, you can dual paragraph.

ex: introduce 1st character - opening situation in book
Introduce 2nd character - opening situation in book
Introduce conflict that brings the two together
Introduce the stakes and how they merge their stories to provide on outcome #askagent

Cortney Radocaj
@CortneyRadocaj
Literary Agent
literary agent @belcastr • she/they • queer • neurodivergent • query me at QueryManager.com/CortneyRadocaj
111 MSWL
43 AskAgent
74 Tips

Kaitlyn Blackman @KaitlynBlackman

@CortneyRadocaj I’ve got another one! If you are a named finalist in a literary comp, do you let the agents you’ve queried know? Or only notify of an award/winning designation?
Replying to @KaitlynBlackman

you can, sure! it's not something i put a ton of stock in (i.e. i'm not going to jump on a project SOLELY bc an author was a finalized/even winner of anything) but it's nice to know, and something you should be proud of and can absolutely include in your bio :)

Cortney Radocaj
@CortneyRadocaj
Literary Agent
literary agent @belcastr • she/they • queer • neurodivergent • query me at QueryManager.com/CortneyRadocaj
111 MSWL
43 AskAgent
74 Tips

jem (ze/zir) | #StopTheShock @jem_zero

@CortneyRadocaj (open-ended Q) how does your neurodivergence affect your agenting experience? i see so few agents open about being ND & how they engage with ND authors, both querying and as clients
Replying to @jem_zero

ohhh HMMM that's a good question. i have to be very aware of where my mental health is; when i'm in a depressive episode, i work very hard to make sure i'm giving every query as much of my energy as i can, to ensure i'm not passing on things bc Depression™️. same with the anxiety

Cortney Radocaj
@CortneyRadocaj
Literary Agent
literary agent @belcastr • she/they • queer • neurodivergent • query me at QueryManager.com/CortneyRadocaj
111 MSWL
43 AskAgent
74 Tips

🛸🍿Fenley Cooper #SF # mystery #thriller🎧✍🏻 @FenleyCooper

@CortneyRadocaj I see a tendency in thrillers to start with a cold open/teaser. That sets up the victim's story, and then there's much back and forth. Do you like that organization, or prefer the straight start-to-finish plotting?
Replying to @FenleyCooper

i'm not a huge thriller person, so i might not be the right person to ask. depends on how well it's executed, honestly! i only accept YA thrillers, and YA is just structured differently than adult is overall, and i do tend to prefer no prologue-esque materials

Cortney Radocaj
@CortneyRadocaj
Literary Agent
literary agent @belcastr • she/they • queer • neurodivergent • query me at QueryManager.com/CortneyRadocaj
111 MSWL
43 AskAgent
74 Tips

Mister Hand @MisterHand1

@CortneyRadocaj 30% of my requests for more material (9 fulls, 1 partial) were ghosted after I sent the novel without even a form rejection. Is this the new normal, or just bad luck?
Replying to @MisterHand1

depends on agency policy. some agencies have a "no answer means no" policy; others state they'll answer everything; others only answer requested materials. look at each agency site and see what their policies are, and on how soon they're okay with being nudged!

Cortney Radocaj
@CortneyRadocaj
Literary Agent
literary agent @belcastr • she/they • queer • neurodivergent • query me at QueryManager.com/CortneyRadocaj
111 MSWL
43 AskAgent
74 Tips

🛸🍿Fenley Cooper #SF # mystery #thriller🎧✍🏻 @FenleyCooper

@CortneyRadocaj Do you follow the pitch days, like pitmad, et al?
Replying to @FenleyCooper

absolutely! sometimes i sit out if i've got too much going on in my personal life, or too many submissions on my docket that i need to get through, but i do participate in most of them

Cortney Radocaj
@CortneyRadocaj
Literary Agent
literary agent @belcastr • she/they • queer • neurodivergent • query me at QueryManager.com/CortneyRadocaj
111 MSWL
43 AskAgent
74 Tips
Cortney Radocaj
@CortneyRadocaj
Literary Agent
literary agent @belcastr • she/they • queer • neurodivergent • query me at QueryManager.com/CortneyRadocaj
111 MSWL
43 AskAgent
74 Tips

Kaitlyn Blackman @KaitlynBlackman

@CortneyRadocaj My dream agent has been closed for queries for a year. Her #mswl checks every box and my book even has a very specific ask she’s looking for. I LOVE her client list and I just feel we’d be a great fit. Do I just move on? Would I reach out to her if I got a rep offer?
Replying to @KaitlynBlackman

no, don't reach out if you get a rep offer - it sucks when your dream agent is closed for a long period of time, but it is what it is, and encroaching on that boundary wouldn't be a fair thing to put on that agent. and while feeling like you're missing out on someone who feels

Cortney Radocaj
@CortneyRadocaj
Literary Agent
literary agent @belcastr • she/they • queer • neurodivergent • query me at QueryManager.com/CortneyRadocaj
111 MSWL
43 AskAgent
74 Tips

whetstone @tc_whetstone

@CortneyRadocaj In the case of querying to early, what changes would you, or agents in general, want to see before querying again (and also over what course of time)? In my case, I queried last year and both the letter and MS were AWFUL.
Replying to @tc_whetstone

it's hard to say without seeing the individual query/pages, but mostly it's wanting to see substantial, pervasive changes throughout the work (i.e. not just doing a line edit or tweaking a chapter or two).

Cortney Radocaj
@CortneyRadocaj
Literary Agent
literary agent @belcastr • she/they • queer • neurodivergent • query me at QueryManager.com/CortneyRadocaj
111 MSWL
43 AskAgent
74 Tips
Cortney Radocaj
@CortneyRadocaj
Literary Agent
literary agent @belcastr • she/they • queer • neurodivergent • query me at QueryManager.com/CortneyRadocaj
111 MSWL
43 AskAgent
74 Tips

Shelby Riddick is Inside again💗💜💙🏳️‍🌈 @ShelbyRiddick

@CortneyRadocaj When reading subs, do you normally prefer a certain level of design to the manuscript (ie scene breaks,
book title in the headers, footers, chapter headers etc.) already established, or a clean slate Times New Roman 12 pt double space document?
Replying to @ShelbyRiddick

either is fine! it's nice to have it formatted nicely with the headers and title page, but it's not an issue if that's not there. i will say there should always be a page break with a clear sign that there's a new chapter though, just for ease of reading!