Susan Hawk
@susanhawk
Literary Agent
Children's and YA Book Agent at Upstart Crow Literary. Excited to read your query!
120 MSWL
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Nancy Parish @nancyparish

#askupstart What does "I didn't connect with the main character" mean in a query. Is that something that can be easily fixed .
Replying to @nancyparish

When I say that I mean I was unable to care for the character - to be invested in them, to love them. And that usually means something's not right with bringing the character to life, and making their motivations clear. #AskUpstart

Susan Hawk
@susanhawk
Literary Agent
Children's and YA Book Agent at Upstart Crow Literary. Excited to read your query!
120 MSWL
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Lynn Rogalsky 💻 @lynn_rog

What do you look for in a nonfiction PB, biography or otherwise?
Also, are chapter books a hard sell?

#AskUpstart
Replying to @lynn_rog

See my response to another writer here, about CBs. For nonfiction, I look for projects that will be exciting for kids. There are so many possible subjects, but I want a book I know readers will love. #AskUpstart

Susan Hawk
@susanhawk
Literary Agent
Children's and YA Book Agent at Upstart Crow Literary. Excited to read your query!
120 MSWL
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3 Tips
Susan Hawk
@susanhawk
Literary Agent
Children's and YA Book Agent at Upstart Crow Literary. Excited to read your query!
120 MSWL
26 AskAgent
3 Tips
Susan Hawk
@susanhawk
Literary Agent
Children's and YA Book Agent at Upstart Crow Literary. Excited to read your query!
120 MSWL
26 AskAgent
3 Tips

Nancy Parish @nancyparish

#AskUpstart Is it okay to use movies as comps in a query letter?
Replying to @nancyparish

I'd be sure to use a book, or two books!, before you comp to a movie. But when it fits, go for it! #AskUpstart

Susan Hawk
@susanhawk
Literary Agent
Children's and YA Book Agent at Upstart Crow Literary. Excited to read your query!
120 MSWL
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Lynn Rogalsky 💻 @lynn_rog

#askUpstart I don't write to them, but I'm curious how trends begin.
Replying to @lynn_rog

Now that's a fascinating question! Why does a certain book feel absolutely perfect, at a certain time and place? My gut is that it often will connect to the larger culture - what's happening in the world at the time. #AskUpstart

Susan Hawk
@susanhawk
Literary Agent
Children's and YA Book Agent at Upstart Crow Literary. Excited to read your query!
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Danielle Chiotti @daniellechiotti

@mikalroy Lately, I find myself dealing less in trends and more in: does this story surprise and delight me? I want to be surprised and delighted. #AskUpstart
Replying to @daniellechiotti

I don't think we're in a heavy trend period - no vampires taking over the shelves, no dystopian dominance. Its a good thing! More exciting for the field to be open. I do see exciting growth, esp in MG, where editors are hungry for GNs, and books for the older readers. #AskUpstart

Susan Hawk
@susanhawk
Literary Agent
Children's and YA Book Agent at Upstart Crow Literary. Excited to read your query!
120 MSWL
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3 Tips
Susan Hawk
@susanhawk
Literary Agent
Children's and YA Book Agent at Upstart Crow Literary. Excited to read your query!
120 MSWL
26 AskAgent
3 Tips
Susan Hawk
@susanhawk
Literary Agent
Children's and YA Book Agent at Upstart Crow Literary. Excited to read your query!
120 MSWL
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Maureen M. Mirabito @maureenmirabito

What’s been the biggest surprise in the MG market in recent years, both in terms of what‘s written and what’s selling? #askupstart
Replying to @maureenmirabito

I can't think of a surprise, but I am very glad for the increased representation we're seeing - though more to do there, for sure. I'm delighted that GNs are doing so well, and also love older MG - the boundaries that are being pushed there. #AskUpstart

Susan Hawk
@susanhawk
Literary Agent
Children's and YA Book Agent at Upstart Crow Literary. Excited to read your query!
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Cindy @sea_thought

Along the same line as @BackyardReading asked, what suggestions can you offer to help an inexperienced, unagented, rural-living(like no cell service or McDonald’s), Retired teacher, hopeful author, OK: Me...to get started in the publishing process? #AskUpstart
Replying to @sea_thought

I'm sure you're doing this already but, read, read, read! The more you read, the better writer you'll become. And, being that you're rural this might be more challenging, but see if you can find other writers to share work/critiques with. #AskUpstart

Susan Hawk
@susanhawk
Literary Agent
Children's and YA Book Agent at Upstart Crow Literary. Excited to read your query!
120 MSWL
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Susan Hawk
@susanhawk
Literary Agent
Children's and YA Book Agent at Upstart Crow Literary. Excited to read your query!
120 MSWL
26 AskAgent
3 Tips

Lynn Rogalsky 💻 @lynn_rog

For a NF picture book do you like to see sidebars, or prefer the information be put into back matter? Do NF PBs still run between 500-2,000 words?
#AskUpstart
Replying to @lynn_rog

Yes, that's the word count range. I prefer on the shorter end of that spectrum. Backmatter is less distracting, though I'd say that either if fine as long as it suits the material. #AskUpstart

Susan Hawk
@susanhawk
Literary Agent
Children's and YA Book Agent at Upstart Crow Literary. Excited to read your query!
120 MSWL
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Susan Hawk
@susanhawk
Literary Agent
Children's and YA Book Agent at Upstart Crow Literary. Excited to read your query!
120 MSWL
26 AskAgent
3 Tips

Khadijah L. VanBrakle 🇨🇦 @LVanBrakle

Have you ever asked an author to query you over social media? Just out of the blue. Someone you've never met in person. If that happens, should the author think its abnormal? #askupstart
Replying to @LVanBrakle

I've reached out to folks (though I believe I found an email address, so didn't DM or use social media). I send a note that's very specific about why I'm reaching out and what drew me to their work. In addition, I give a bit of my background and links to more info. #AskUpstart

Susan Hawk
@susanhawk
Literary Agent
Children's and YA Book Agent at Upstart Crow Literary. Excited to read your query!
120 MSWL
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Elizabeth Toth (Stoever) @Stoeverit

#AskUpstart What are the most common types (or examples) of revisions you do with debut authors? Pacing, char development, improving the ending? Thx!
Replying to @Stoeverit

It really depends on the project and the writer! I think you want an agent who has lots of tools in her toolbag and knows when to use each of them. #AskUpstart

Susan Hawk
@susanhawk
Literary Agent
Children's and YA Book Agent at Upstart Crow Literary. Excited to read your query!
120 MSWL
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Lynn Rogalsky 💻 @lynn_rog

#AskUpstart I'm wondering what the limit is on the number of illustrator notes a writer can tactfully include in their manuscript? One to three notes per MS?
Replying to @lynn_rog

I don't think there's a specific number. Certain manuscripts require more, some barely need any -- it just depends. That said, don't leave one in just in case. If you can take it out without making the ms confusing, do so. #AskUpstart

Susan Hawk
@susanhawk
Literary Agent
Children's and YA Book Agent at Upstart Crow Literary. Excited to read your query!
120 MSWL
26 AskAgent
3 Tips
Susan Hawk
@susanhawk
Literary Agent
Children's and YA Book Agent at Upstart Crow Literary. Excited to read your query!
120 MSWL
26 AskAgent
3 Tips

Lynn Rogalsky 💻 @lynn_rog

#AskUpstart @susanhawk : Your bio says you’re looking for "some" nonfiction for children. What type of nonfiction are you looking to find from a writer?
Replying to @lynn_rog

I'm open to NF in any category for teens or children. I'd love to see NF in graphic novel form. I really want subjects and themes that haven't already been written about multiple times. I'm especially looking for diverse subjects and creators here. #AskUpstart

Susan Hawk
@susanhawk
Literary Agent
Children's and YA Book Agent at Upstart Crow Literary. Excited to read your query!
120 MSWL
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Cara Liebowitz @spazgirl11

If you're unclear on the feedback an agent offers on your full, is it appropriate to email back and ask for clarification? I often find when agents offer feedback I'm not entirely sure what they mean. #askupstart
Replying to @spazgirl11

Fine to email back and ask. That said, I often can't answer, due to the number of queries I receive. If I'm not offering rep, I probably need to move on. But, I don't think it's a no-no to ask. #askUpstart