Susan Hawk
Literary Agent
Upstart Crow Literary
Children's and YA Book Agent at Upstart Crow Literary. Excited to read your query!
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Nancy Parish @nancyparish
#askupstart What does "I didn't connect with the main character" mean in a query. Is that something that can be easily fixed .When I say that I mean I was unable to care for the character - to be invested in them, to love them. And that usually means something's not right with bringing the character to life, and making their motivations clear. #AskUpstart
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Lynn Rogalsky 💻 @lynn_rog
What do you look for in a nonfiction PB, biography or otherwise?Also, are chapter books a hard sell?
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See my response to another writer here, about CBs. For nonfiction, I look for projects that will be exciting for kids. There are so many possible subjects, but I want a book I know readers will love. #AskUpstart
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Susan Hawk @susanhawk
Time for more #MSWL! In terms of categories, I am really hungry for MG. Stand-alone or series, classic-feeling or not, contemporary or historical, mystery, fantasy, sci-fi, adventure - I’d like to see more MG!I'm very hungry to see #MG. I tweeted last week about what I'm looking for in that category: twitter.com/susanhawk/stat…. #AskUpstart
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Nancy Parish @nancyparish
#AskUpstart Is it okay to use movies as comps in a query letter?I'd be sure to use a book, or two books!, before you comp to a movie. But when it fits, go for it! #AskUpstart
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Lynn Rogalsky 💻 @lynn_rog
#askUpstart I don't write to them, but I'm curious how trends begin.Now that's a fascinating question! Why does a certain book feel absolutely perfect, at a certain time and place? My gut is that it often will connect to the larger culture - what's happening in the world at the time. #AskUpstart
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Danielle Chiotti @daniellechiotti
@mikalroy Lately, I find myself dealing less in trends and more in: does this story surprise and delight me? I want to be surprised and delighted. #AskUpstartI don't think we're in a heavy trend period - no vampires taking over the shelves, no dystopian dominance. Its a good thing! More exciting for the field to be open. I do see exciting growth, esp in MG, where editors are hungry for GNs, and books for the older readers. #AskUpstart
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Maureen M. Mirabito @maureenmirabito
@mikalroy Yes, you’re right. I am. Thank you for that shift. I was always under the impression that the query was the ticket to an agent reading more. First pages makes sense.Just seconding Michael's comment here! No one makes an offer of rep because of a great query. It's the manuscript that matters most! #AskUpstart
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kirsten pendreigh @kpiependreigh
@UpstartCrowLit #AskUpstart Hello! I write PB's. Susan, I see that you, like many agents, currently prefer author-illustrators...What is your advice for author-only PB writers? Hypothetically, how might a person convince you to consider a text-only PB? ;)Well, you can always send it to me to see! My advice is: persistence! Keep track of who's looking for PB texts, keep improving your craft, and keep going! #AskUpstart
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Maureen M. Mirabito @maureenmirabito
What’s been the biggest surprise in the MG market in recent years, both in terms of what‘s written and what’s selling? #askupstartI can't think of a surprise, but I am very glad for the increased representation we're seeing - though more to do there, for sure. I'm delighted that GNs are doing so well, and also love older MG - the boundaries that are being pushed there. #AskUpstart
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Cindy @sea_thought
Along the same line as @BackyardReading asked, what suggestions can you offer to help an inexperienced, unagented, rural-living(like no cell service or McDonald’s), Retired teacher, hopeful author, OK: Me...to get started in the publishing process? #AskUpstartI'm sure you're doing this already but, read, read, read! The more you read, the better writer you'll become. And, being that you're rural this might be more challenging, but see if you can find other writers to share work/critiques with. #AskUpstart
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Christina Julian @christin_julian
I've never been on time for anything but here I am! #AskUpstart @UpstartCrowLit 1) In PB manuscripts, is 1st person a no-no? Or ok if the story begs to be told directly by the mc? 2) what's the number 1 thing someone can do to make a query standout of the slush. #amqueryingThe #1 way to stand out is to write a wonderful book. Honestly, if you do that, you will stand-out! #AskUpstart
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Lynn Rogalsky 💻 @lynn_rog
For a NF picture book do you like to see sidebars, or prefer the information be put into back matter? Do NF PBs still run between 500-2,000 words?#AskUpstart
Yes, that's the word count range. I prefer on the shorter end of that spectrum. Backmatter is less distracting, though I'd say that either if fine as long as it suits the material. #AskUpstart
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Susan Hawk @susanhawk
@LVanBrakle I've reached out to folks (though I believe I found an email address, so didn't DM or use social media). I send a note that's very specific about why I'm reaching out and what drew me to their work. In addition, I give a bit of my background and links to more info. #AskUpstartSo, no I don't think it's abnormal - but you do want to get plenty of info about whoever it is. Is this what you mean? #AskUpstart
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Khadijah L. VanBrakle 🇨🇦 @LVanBrakle
Have you ever asked an author to query you over social media? Just out of the blue. Someone you've never met in person. If that happens, should the author think its abnormal? #askupstartI've reached out to folks (though I believe I found an email address, so didn't DM or use social media). I send a note that's very specific about why I'm reaching out and what drew me to their work. In addition, I give a bit of my background and links to more info. #AskUpstart
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Elizabeth Toth (Stoever) @Stoeverit
#AskUpstart What are the most common types (or examples) of revisions you do with debut authors? Pacing, char development, improving the ending? Thx!It really depends on the project and the writer! I think you want an agent who has lots of tools in her toolbag and knows when to use each of them. #AskUpstart
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Lynn Rogalsky 💻 @lynn_rog
#AskUpstart I'm wondering what the limit is on the number of illustrator notes a writer can tactfully include in their manuscript? One to three notes per MS?I don't think there's a specific number. Certain manuscripts require more, some barely need any -- it just depends. That said, don't leave one in just in case. If you can take it out without making the ms confusing, do so. #AskUpstart
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Adam Blackman @Adamdbgood
#AskUpstart If a pitch is liked during a Twitter event, when should one submit a query? That day? Within the week? Does it matter as long as the *heart* is referenced in the query letter? (Thanks for offering this Q&A!)The latter! Don't rush to send the project if it isn't polished yet. Send it when it's as ready as you can make it. #askUpstart
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Lynn Rogalsky 💻 @lynn_rog
#AskUpstart @susanhawk : Your bio says you’re looking for "some" nonfiction for children. What type of nonfiction are you looking to find from a writer?I'm open to NF in any category for teens or children. I'd love to see NF in graphic novel form. I really want subjects and themes that haven't already been written about multiple times. I'm especially looking for diverse subjects and creators here. #AskUpstart
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Cara Liebowitz @spazgirl11
If you're unclear on the feedback an agent offers on your full, is it appropriate to email back and ask for clarification? I often find when agents offer feedback I'm not entirely sure what they mean. #askupstartFine to email back and ask. That said, I often can't answer, due to the number of queries I receive. If I'm not offering rep, I probably need to move on. But, I don't think it's a no-no to ask. #askUpstart