Caitie Flum
Literary Agent
Liza Dawson Associates
Associate agent at Liza Dawson Associates. Thoughts are my own. Huge nerd, musical theater lover
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I love a good GIF on twitter, but a query is not the right place to tell your story in GIFs #querytip
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I know it is really difficult, but a great hook can really make a difference in your query! #querytip
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Responded to 100 queries this AM. Most common reason for no - sounded too much like everything else. Show why your book is diff. #querytip
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Responding to queries biggest problem I am seeing: not saying what is it about. So many tell me nothing about the plot! #querytip
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Queries that are from the perspective of the character just don't work. #querytip
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"I know you request to only see the query first, but" No. Just no. #querytip
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Your book w/ an eleven-year-old protagonist is not YA. #querytip
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Just got a query saying something is MG/YA. #querytip -it isn't.
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Do not write your query from the perspective of your MC. #querytip
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Also - just because @misterkristoff used a Harry Potter comp, doesn't mean you can in your query. Don't. Please. My #querytip until I die
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Never ever, ever, EVER compare your book to Harry Potter in your query. #querytip
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Have someone who has not read your manuscript read the query and make sure it makes sense. Most common reason I rejected tonight. #querytip
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If you spell my name wrong, I won't automatically reject you, but you're starting w/ irritating me. Don't do that #querytip
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A romance novel should not be over 130,000 words... #querytip
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Don't comp your YA contemporary to John Green. #querytip
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If we interact on twitter/I follow you, make sure you mention it in query! #querytip (yes, this = subtweet and I mentioned it in email back)
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Only query one project at a time. If I see 3 emails in a row w/ different projects in each one, pretty sure you didn't research. #querytip
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If you are going to try to name drop Stephen King in your query, at least spell his name right. #querytip
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Three queries in a row mentioned that their spouse loved the book. That is nice, but does not matter. #querytip
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Of the last 30 queries I read, only 3 had hooks. Hooks make such a difference. Figure out what your hook is and include it! #querytip