Jordy Albert

Q10: I'm not sure of the genre. The premise doesn't sound like it's for me. Pass. #tenqueries

Q9: MG fantasy(?). Interesting premise, but I don't get a good sense of the characters & the word count is a bit low. Pass. #tenqueries

Q8: No greeting or query. Only sample pages. Pass. #tenqueries

Q7: Fantasy. Query provides too much information...more of a synopsis. Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: YA fantasy. Pages start in the middle of action. Premise isn't really for me. Pass. #tenqueries

Q5: Query doesn't follow guidelines. Please don't just send sample pages :( Pass. #tenqueries

Q4: YA Paranormal Romance. The premise isn't fresh; feels too much like other books. Pass. #tenqueries

Q3: MG fantasy. Query is a little vague. The opening pages could establish the setting a bit better. Pass. #tenqueries

Q2: 2. MG Historical. Chapter book (I'm not representing chapter books at this time). Pass. #tenqueries

Q1: No pitch, doesn't follow guidelines, sent attachment (full ms?) *shakes head* Pass. #tenqueries

Should I do a #tenqueries today?

Q10: MG fantasy. No introduction or query letter :( Pass. #tenqueries

Q9: MG fantasy(?). The query is a little vague; I'm not clear on the premise. Pass. #tenqueries

Q8: MG fantasy. The premise isn't for me. Didn't get caught up in the pages. Pass. #tenqueries

Q7: Sample pages sent as an attachment :( We don't open attachments unless requested. Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: No sample pages :( Please be sure to follow submission guidelines. Pass. #tenqueries

Q5: YA sci-fi. The premise seems a bit too familiar. Didn't get caught up in the sample pages. Pass. #tenqueries

Q4: MG fantasy. Premise isn't for me. Pass. #tenqueries

Q3: YA fantasy. The premise feels too familiar. And the POV changes a lot, so it was difficult to connect w/characters. Pass. #tenqueries

Q2: Historical Romance. I like the premise, but the pages just seemed to move too fast. Didn't get drawn into the story. Pass #tenqueries