Kaitlyn Johnson

Literary Agent

Belcastro Agency

Agent @belcastr. insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

If you want your book to even remotely interest me, do NOT insult my work as an agent thus far and insinuate none of it can possibly make a difference until I come upon YOUR book. #querytip

Offensive, rude, small-minded, (continues the list to infinity)...😡

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

#querytip Learn your hyphens:

1) a fifty-five-year-old
2) a fifty-five-year-old man
3) a group of ten- to twelve-year-olds

No hyphen:

4) ten years old
5) ten years of age

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

You wrote a series. That's awesome. BUT, only focus on Book #1 in the query.

You can mention it's intended to be the first of a series, but the agent/editor is only focusing on THAT story. If necessary, they'll ask you about the series details later. #querytip

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Don't tell me the book themes - loss, love, healing; give me the character, the conflict, and the stakes. When in doubt RESEARCH #querytip

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

So, the first six queries tonight are all one big smashed paragraph that barely tells me anything about the book. People, if you do zero research you will have zero success. #querytip

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

@CorvisieroLit is officially open to queries again! Check out the agent bios and be sure to submit to our Query Manager profiles! #amquerying #querytip corvisieroagency.com/representation…

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Be sure to check your inbox settings. If I try to respond to your query four times, and it rejects it every time, I have to simply delete it. There's nothing I can do to fix it 🙁 #amagenting #querytip

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

2018 is almost here! Be sure to check out my Events page and come see me at a conference next year! #amwriting #amediting #amquerying #querytip #pubtip #conferences facebook.com/pg/LiteraryKat…

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

It's not a "fictional writing project". It's a book. A manuscript. A novel. Own your blood, sweat, and ink. #querytip

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

#querytip It's nice to know your motivation for writing the book, or what exactly you're looking for in an agent. But save these details for THE CALL. Don't waste your precious space in a query. Agents want to learn about your book, first and foremost.

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Just opened 6 queries in a row that began with rhetorical questions. Please, don't do this. It leaves the query feeling hook-less (my dumb word for uninteresting) and takes up space. #querytip

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

#Querytip If you don't give me your full name, I'll either use your initials (awkward), guess from your email address, or use your actual email address if it's that vague. Please include the full name in the query!

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Just a reminder to writers: Corvisiero is closed to queries until Jan 2 (and will also only be accepting through Query Manager at that date). If you send us one before then, it will be deleted while we clean out the inboxes. #amwriting #amediting #amquerying #querytip

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Kaitlyn Johnson @kaitylynne13

Last week, saying no to those few manuscripts killed me. I've been there, I've gotten the rejection letters. It sucked imagining the faces when they open my email. I don't like saying no #amediting #amquerying #writers #querytip
Replying to @kaitylynne13

So, I just want to say again, YOU HAVE SO MUCH TALENT AND POTENTIAL. If I give an R&R, it means a lot. I don't just throw them around. And I hope I could help so you find that agent who clicks, who loves instead of likes #amquerying #amediting #querytip #writers

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Kaitlyn Johnson @kaitylynne13

But, often, it ends up still not feeling like a perfect connection. Something niggles into the brain and says "You like but don't love". #amquerying #amediting #querytip #writers
Replying to @kaitylynne13

And, #writers, you deserve love. You deserve the agent who sees your book's journey, who can't wait to fling it at those special, amazing publishers and editors. I know it's easy to just say that, but it's better for your career. #amediting #amquerying #querytip

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips