Kaitlyn Johnson

Literary Agent

Belcastro Agency

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Laurie Lascos @LaurieLascos

@kaitylynne13 What do you prefer to go in the bio-paragraph of the query if an author has no existing publications, yet?
Replying to @LaurieLascos

I usually advise just giving a bit about you. At minimum, where you went to college, what you majored in, what your current job is, or current state you live in. Just give us a little feel of YOU #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Clementine is taking a break for a bit @clemmiegirlnz

@kaitylynne13 Hi! At what point, eg after how many rejections or similar, would you recommend shelving an MS and trying again with a different one?
#askagent
Replying to @clemmiegirlnz

If you don't have offers after 6 months, it may be time to consider a deeper edit. After a year, I think you might consider moving to a new ms. Unless you see a specific MSWL, though, for your story. It's hard because depends how many passes you receive in that time #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Renee Brown @ReneeSue

@kaitylynne13 I'm working on two stories one is adult fantasy and the other YA fantasy. Both are set in the same world and are planned to come together for a combined third book. Is this something that would work?
Replying to @ReneeSue

This is hard, because as a writer, you often are sold on a platform. Your YA readers may not be open to following you to an Adult platform, so your series might suffer (targeting a completely different audience). Most editors want you to stick to one age first #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Samantha Lienhard @SamLienhard

@kaitylynne13 How should past publications be listed in the query letter? Should the title and publisher both be listed, or just one of those? #askagent
Replying to @SamLienhard

My personal fave is seeing something like, "I've written several articles for JOURNAL/MAGAZINE and my novel TITLE was published through HOUSE in YEAR." I've seen a lot of ways but always include the title, at the least. #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Jordan Riley Swan @JordanRileySwan

@kaitylynne13 Do you recommend getting an editor to go over the query letter before it gets sent to you?
Replying to @JordanRileySwan

An editor is a great avenue to really help fine tune the query, but don't forget you can turn to beta readers and whatnot to get some clarity before paying someone. If you really dislike writing queries, I would recommend an editor. #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Pitch contests, however, I wish you luck. It is then & ONLY THEN that we will welcome seeing your book details on social media and giving you a ❤️ if we are interested. Hashtags like #askagent, too, are avenues but only during the time slot the agent offers (not a week later)

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Matt Leyshon @mleyshonauth

@kaitylynne13 Hi Kaitlyn,

How much does a brief self-publishing stint (to garner reviews) affect the chances of an MS? Can reviews be helpful in a query? #askagent
Replying to @mleyshonauth

Many agents do not accept previously published works, even self-published, unless they sold extraordinarily well. Reviews don't often help when searching for an agent, but add in your bio if you've previously published other titles. #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Ok, #askagent is over for today, but here's a parting message:

It's 2018. A new year. Be sure to start off on the right foot. Be kind. Be understanding. And be strong.

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Cassie Miller-is-writing/revising ✊🏻 @Cmiller61408

@kaitylynne13 Hi, Kaitlyn! 🙂 What is the thing that is most important to you with a query (likely to make you request more) & what is the biggest turn off? #askagent
Replying to @Cmiller61408

I love the stakes. WHY must these characters work together (or against one another) and WHAT happens if they succeed or fail? That catches me. Turn offs are usually when authors claim they are the next bestseller, or no book is like theirs, or saying genre usually fails #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Rachel Greenlaw @rachelgreenlaw_

@kaitylynne13 Thank you.It could actually work better with the magic system and be pretty fun to write! What's the most interesting setting you've seen?
Replying to @rachelgreenlaw_

Ooo that's a tough one. One of my current clients has a Fantasy that's made of city, island, and colonial inspirations. It's flipping phenomenal (plus, that touch of magic!). #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Rachel Greenlaw @rachelgreenlaw_

@kaitylynne13 How about in fantasy? I don't know whether to make dramatic changes and set my story in my Namibian inspired kingdom which is part of world
Replying to @rachelgreenlaw_

In fantasy, a lot of worlds are inspired from popular places here. Namibian could be interesting. Just be sure it stays true to the story. It's always obvious when a writer sets a story in a place just because of a "wow factor" and it sours the entire novel. #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Bridget Grenolds @12Gidget25

@kaitylynne13 How much emphasis do you put on a writer's social media presence? Also, would you suggest having a larger footprint on one site or smaller prints on various sites?
Replying to @12Gidget25

Platform, while important, isn't an auto no. We can always work together to bulk that presence. But I would like to see at least one frequent site where the write is active. And a website/blog is helpful for gathering an audience. #askagent