Kaitlyn Katsoupis
Literary Agent
Belcastro Agency
Agent @belcastr. insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147

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Stacy Nockowitz @snockowitz
@kaitylynne13 Hi! How do agents get in touch if they want to sign you? I’ve heard about “the call,” but will they email first? Thanks for your #askagent time tonight!They should email you first to set up a call and get your phone number. Then you'll agree on a time that works to discuss your story #askagent

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Jennifer Kinzler @JenniferKinzler
@kaitylynne13 Thanks for doing this! Mine is a 2-part question:1. I heard you should only query one manuscript at a time, is that correct?
2. If that is true, is there an easy way to "close" the queries on one and start the next one?
Sorry if that's confusing!
You really should only query one ms at a time. The exception is if you see a MSWL or get a personal request for one MS and are already querying a different one, then it's ok. #askagent

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Lydia D @DiveDiva91
@kaitylynne13 I know queries shouldn't be cookie cutter letters, but how personal do you need to make them? Should you write a whole new one per agent, or can you use a base letter & change the details depending on if you've interacted with the agent before? (keeping the actual pitch the same)The actual pitch can definitely stay the same! If you have a personalization (that is more than just "I saw you love fantasy"), go ahead and add it, but your pitch can remain as is. #askagent

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Annabelle Dando @annabelledando
@kaitylynne13 Thanks! What if they have already sent a rejection (like several months ago), or have a no response means no policy? Is it better to just not re-query?If they've already sent a rejection, most ask you not to resubmit unless it's been intensely revised. A no response policy usually signals not to resubmit. #askagent

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Angelia Bailey @angeliabailey2
@kaitylynne13 I live in the U.S. but the book I wrote takes place in France. Can I query agents in that country? Or is it best to stick with agents in the country I live in?You can query any agents you like, anywhere. There's no rule saying you can't be represented by an overseas agent. Depends what you want from the agent/house/relationship. =] #askagent

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Annabelle Dando @annabelledando
@kaitylynne13 If you queried (particularly to query letter only, no pages agents) before you realized you really needed to refine your query letter, is it ok to re-query w/ stronger query letter? If so, should you mention it's a re-query? #askagentYou should definitely mention it's a re-query. The only problem is, the agent may not see the new query before the old one. It's kind of a toss-up, but you are allowed to withdraw and re-query if you want to #askagent

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Laurie Lascos @LaurieLascos
@kaitylynne13 What do you prefer to go in the bio-paragraph of the query if an author has no existing publications, yet?I usually advise just giving a bit about you. At minimum, where you went to college, what you majored in, what your current job is, or current state you live in. Just give us a little feel of YOU #askagent

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Clementine is taking a break for a bit @clemmiegirlnz
@kaitylynne13 Hi! At what point, eg after how many rejections or similar, would you recommend shelving an MS and trying again with a different one?#askagent
If you don't have offers after 6 months, it may be time to consider a deeper edit. After a year, I think you might consider moving to a new ms. Unless you see a specific MSWL, though, for your story. It's hard because depends how many passes you receive in that time #askagent

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Samantha Lienhard @SamLienhard
@kaitylynne13 How should past publications be listed in the query letter? Should the title and publisher both be listed, or just one of those? #askagentMy personal fave is seeing something like, "I've written several articles for JOURNAL/MAGAZINE and my novel TITLE was published through HOUSE in YEAR." I've seen a lot of ways but always include the title, at the least. #askagent

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Jordan Riley Swan @JordanRileySwan
@kaitylynne13 Do you recommend getting an editor to go over the query letter before it gets sent to you?An editor is a great avenue to really help fine tune the query, but don't forget you can turn to beta readers and whatnot to get some clarity before paying someone. If you really dislike writing queries, I would recommend an editor. #askagent

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Matt Leyshon @mleyshonauth
@kaitylynne13 Hi Kaitlyn,How much does a brief self-publishing stint (to garner reviews) affect the chances of an MS? Can reviews be helpful in a query? #askagent
Many agents do not accept previously published works, even self-published, unless they sold extraordinarily well. Reviews don't often help when searching for an agent, but add in your bio if you've previously published other titles. #askagent

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Rachel Greenlaw @rachelgreenlaw_
@kaitylynne13 Have you seen many fantasy ms that explore the origins of the 1st world war? The assassination,the spies,the secret deals-but w/magic?Hm, not sure about in Fantasy. Definitely in Urban Fantasy or Magical Realism, though. Assassins and spies have become very popular, even with the touch of magic. #askagent

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Kaitlyn Johnson @kaitylynne13
@Cmiller61408 I love the stakes. WHY must these characters work together (or against one another) and WHAT happens if they succeed or fail? That catches me. Turn offs are usually when authors claim they are the next bestseller, or no book is like theirs, or saying genre usually fails #askagentI also dislike cliche, stereotyped characters. Unless there's a solid reasoning, or the character grows from that form of existence, it sometimes spawns an eye roll and a pass #askagent

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Cassie Miller-is-writing/revising ✊🏻 @Cmiller61408
@kaitylynne13 Hi, Kaitlyn! 🙂 What is the thing that is most important to you with a query (likely to make you request more) & what is the biggest turn off? #askagentI love the stakes. WHY must these characters work together (or against one another) and WHAT happens if they succeed or fail? That catches me. Turn offs are usually when authors claim they are the next bestseller, or no book is like theirs, or saying genre usually fails #askagent

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Rachel Greenlaw @rachelgreenlaw_
@kaitylynne13 Thank you.It could actually work better with the magic system and be pretty fun to write! What's the most interesting setting you've seen?Ooo that's a tough one. One of my current clients has a Fantasy that's made of city, island, and colonial inspirations. It's flipping phenomenal (plus, that touch of magic!). #askagent

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Rachel Greenlaw @rachelgreenlaw_
@kaitylynne13 How about in fantasy? I don't know whether to make dramatic changes and set my story in my Namibian inspired kingdom which is part of worldIn fantasy, a lot of worlds are inspired from popular places here. Namibian could be interesting. Just be sure it stays true to the story. It's always obvious when a writer sets a story in a place just because of a "wow factor" and it sours the entire novel. #askagent

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Bridget Grenolds @12Gidget25
@kaitylynne13 How much emphasis do you put on a writer's social media presence? Also, would you suggest having a larger footprint on one site or smaller prints on various sites?Platform, while important, isn't an auto no. We can always work together to bulk that presence. But I would like to see at least one frequent site where the write is active. And a website/blog is helpful for gathering an audience. #askagent