Kaitlyn Johnson

Literary Agent

Belcastro Agency

Agent @belcastr. insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

dmw_writer @dmw_writer

@kaitylynne13 Hi Kaitlyn, are traditional email/website queries the best first approach to an agent, or do you think things like conference pitch sessions, twitter pitches etc. work better?
Replying to @dmw_writer

Depends what works best for you. Traditional queries work, but so do conferences and pitch contests. Why not utilize all? If you're querying, there's no harm in also entering contests or attending conference one-on-ones. #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

merry trishmas @trishwithapen

@kaitylynne13 What are you looking for in a synopsis?
Replying to @trishwithapen

Beginning, middle, end, and short bits on how they all link together. It can be dry. It doesn't have to be exciting as long as I am told the main plot points in the book. No subplots/motivations/emotions #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Kristi McManus 🛫 @kristimcmanus

@kaitylynne13 What is your opinion on HOW to start a story? Some say in the middle of the action, others say build a rapport between your reader and your MC.
#askagent
Replying to @kristimcmanus

It's kind of a blend of both. I love in the midst of a scene, but that can be action-packed or subtle. It doesn't always have to be explosive. But it should introduce us to the character and the conflict/challenge that propels us into the true plot #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Mackenzie Reed @mackenziemreed7

@kaitylynne13 Hello! Do agents mind if an author is interested in writing more than one genre? Say they sign with a thriller but also want to write fantasy or something else in the future?
Replying to @mackenziemreed7

Dependent on agent. If an agent offers you rep, tell them you plan to write other genres/ages and ask if that works with them. If not, they may not be the agent for you #askagent I personally don't mind =]

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Briston Brooks lol @briston_brooks

@kaitylynne13 What factors play into you offering an R&R vs a rejection? #askagent
Replying to @briston_brooks

Yay! If I love the story and truly fall into the characters or concept, and I see a lot of potential in the writer's style or vision, I offer an R&R. It's not often. Usually, it's because I loved it but there's too much editing to be done before it's truly ready #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Zan Lowell is querying @zanlowell

@kaitylynne13 I've seen some agents say they are willing to take a second look at revised queries as long as there are significant enough changes. Of course this is all subjective, but any insight on how to gauge if your revisions are significant enough? Is there also x amount of time to wait?
Replying to @zanlowell

This means there needs to be a deep edit. Either the storyline is completely revamped, the characters plot/motivations are far more fleshed out, or the setting is much more vivid/reworked. It should definitely be recognizable in your hook, but (1/2) #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Spencer Orey @spencerorey

@kaitylynne13 Hi! I've seen a lot of agents working through their email backlog for the end of the year.

Assuming that the novel is in the best shape possible, is there a best time of the year to query?
Replying to @spencerorey

There's not a tried and true date, but usually agents close their boxes toward the end of the year so they can catch up. Then, in Jan/Feb, they reopen and a waterfall of queries come in. I'd suggest either then or mid-year, but it really just depends on the agent #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Kara Seal @KRwriter

@kaitylynne13 Your MSWL mentions you're looking for both historical and fantasy in MG. Does historical fantasy also fall under your interests? 😄 #askagent
Replying to @KRwriter

Yes! I would love to see Historical Fantasy in all ages. Something immersive and unique that I can't put down. Preferably not in settings/perspectives already saturating the market ❤️ #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Tara Santora (they/them) @Tara_Santora

@kaitylynne13 What level of personalization is best in a query letter, assuming you have no connection to the agent? #askagent
Replying to @Tara_Santora

If you have no connection to the agent, it's fine to simply say "I believe my Genre/Age title would be a great fit for your list." However, it's great to mention if you saw them tweet a certain MSWL or if you've followed them on social media, etc. #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Shayna Grissom @ShaynaGrissom

@kaitylynne13 How do agents feel about small press writers?
Replying to @ShaynaGrissom

I think they love them? lol I don't see why that would be a problem or negative at all =] #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Dana Brown @DanaRBrown16

@kaitylynne13 Is it possible to query a book with a notable artist attached to doing the artwork for the cover? Would this turn away an agent or would they welcome it? #askanagent
Replying to @DanaRBrown16

If you have someone attached to the illustration/artwork already, I'd state that. That shouldn't be skipped unless you aren't committed to working with them for the piece #askagent

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips
Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Stephanie Escobar @pokemonpatronus

@kaitylynne13 What is a tasteful way to respond to a rejection? I want to know their reasons for rejecting me; I know I can become a better writer from it, but am not sure how to ask the agent in a professional way.
Replying to @pokemonpatronus

honestly, if the agent doesn't provide feedback, I wouldn't respond asking for more. It's unfortunate, but some don't have time to give more than a form rejection or some simple yet helpful feedback #askagent