Courtney Miller-Callihan
@millercallihan
Literary Agent
Literary agent at Handspun Literary Agency. HEA, HFN, or GTFO. Everything's better with washi tape. She/her.
12 MSWL
40 Tips

Just a thought: maybe don't badmouth a genre the agent specializes in when you query them? #querytip

Laurie McLean
@agentsavant
Literary Agent
Founding partner at Fuse Literary. Representing genre fiction for adults, young adults and middle grade authors. Loves SFF, mystery/thrillers, horror, romance.
1 MSWL
2 Tips

Authors see 4x higher increase in post-promotion revenue when their book is discounted for 5 days or fewer. bit.ly/1NaVKnS #pubtip

Laurie McLean
@agentsavant
Literary Agent
Founding partner at Fuse Literary. Representing genre fiction for adults, young adults and middle grade authors. Loves SFF, mystery/thrillers, horror, romance.
1 MSWL
2 Tips

For How Long Should You Run Your Ebook Price Promotion? bit.ly/1NaVKnS by @DianaUrban at @BookBubPartners #pubtip

Sara Megibow
@SaraMegibow
Literary Agent
she/her Literary Agent at KT Literary. Reading, parenting, table top gaming, baking challah, hiking and wine tasting. Always LGBTQIA+ friendly!
17 MSWL
13 AskAgent
298 Queries
525 Tips

#QueryTip = helpful to include the word "completed" in your query: "query for my completed fantasy novel of 100,000 words." #queries

Carly Watters
@carlywatters
Literary Agent
SVP & Senior Lit Agent @PSLiterary MA in Publishing Studies @CityUniLondon Co-host of @TSNOTYAW VP of Professional Assoc. of Canadian Literary Agents
153 MSWL
229 AskAgent
334 Tips
Mary C. Moore
@Mary_C_Moore
Literary Agent
Literary Agent
110 MSWL
42 AskAgent
222 Tips

Caught up with unsolicited queries. If you cold queried me before March 1st and have not received a response, tweet me. #querystats

Jennifer Azantian
@jenazantian
Literary Agent
Literary Agent. Stepmom. Mom to puppies Zuko and Iroh. Lover of the Fantastic. Occasional sharer of TMI. Queer. First-gen. 🇦🇲 (she/her)
67 MSWL
13 Queries
30 Tips

ALA is open to MG submissions (with any speculative element) today through the end of the month! :D #querytip

Heather McCorkle
@McCorkle_Editor
Editor
AQ editor w/City Owl, Editorial Director of Mystic Owl, romance in: SF/F genres for adults only! Love is love. cityowlpress.com enigmaticeditor.bl
95 MSWL
78 Tips

Do your research before submitting to an agent or publisher. Read up on them, check submission guidelines closely. #QueryTip

Stacey Donaghy
@DonaghyLiterary
Literary Agent
Literary Agent and Founder at Donaghy Literary Group. Be sure to review my #MSWL . Looking forward to reading your query.
23 MSWL
52 AskAgent
96 Tips

#Querytip Manuscripts should be completed before you query. Otherwise it's a waste of everyone's time.

Lane Heymont
@LaneHeymont
Literary Agent
Literary Agent. Connoisseur of horror, schadenfreude, and caffeine. Founder of @TheTobiasAgency . Opinions are my own. (he/him)
65 MSWL
2 AskAgent
477 Tips

Amateurs usually shouldn't tell professionals how to succeed. #SharkTank #QueryTip #writingtips

Amanda Jain
@wensday95
Literary Agent
Literary Agent repping adult fiction and nonfiction @bookendslit . You can query me at QueryManager.com/AJain. Books, books, books, always books. she/her
322 MSWL
16 AskAgent
15 Tips

If I get to the end of your query and you haven't told me the title of your book, that's a problem. #amquerying #querytip

Patricia Nelson
@patricianels
Literary Agent
Literary Agent at Marsal Lyon Literary Agency, representing YA & MG fiction (all genres), women's fiction & romance. She/her.
70 MSWL
2 Queries
94 Tips

Today's oddest query touts the novel's "brand integration" potential for Chili's Restaurants. This... does not inspire confidence. #querytip

Erik Hane
@erikhane
Literary Agent
Founder and Agent, @HeadwaterLit @printrunpodcast with @lzats tennis writing at thedrawtennis.com he/him
65 MSWL
24 AskAgent
9 Queries
15 Tips

Your novel is not "Fitzgerald meets Salinger," please do not query it as such. Specific, contemporary comps #pubtip

Laura Zats
@LZats
Literary Agent
Founder & Agent @HeadwaterLit . Host of the award-winning @printrunpodcast . Publishers Weekly industry MVP. She/her & Ms/Mx. Open to queries!
213 MSWL
176 AskAgent
3124 Queries
162 Tips

Do you see how you can still say the same thing but in a way that's physically possible? Yes? Good. Carry on. #amwriting #pubtip 9/9 FIN.

Laura Zats
@LZats
Literary Agent
Founder & Agent @HeadwaterLit . Host of the award-winning @printrunpodcast . Publishers Weekly industry MVP. She/her & Ms/Mx. Open to queries!
213 MSWL
176 AskAgent
3124 Queries
162 Tips

EXAMPLE:
"I love cheese." She sighed. "If only I weren't lactose intolerant."
#pubtip #amwriting 8/?

Laura Zats
@LZats
Literary Agent
Founder & Agent @HeadwaterLit . Host of the award-winning @printrunpodcast . Publishers Weekly industry MVP. She/her & Ms/Mx. Open to queries!
213 MSWL
176 AskAgent
3124 Queries
162 Tips

The solution? PERIODS INSTEAD OF COMMAS. Don't link those verbs to the text itself, but rather, to the speaker #pubtip #amwriting 7/?

Laura Zats
@LZats
Literary Agent
Founder & Agent @HeadwaterLit . Host of the award-winning @printrunpodcast . Publishers Weekly industry MVP. She/her & Ms/Mx. Open to queries!
213 MSWL
176 AskAgent
3124 Queries
162 Tips

HOWEVER, there are STILL ways you can use laugh, sigh, etc in dialogue tags w/o being physically imposible #pubtip #amwriting 6/?

Laura Zats
@LZats
Literary Agent
Founder & Agent @HeadwaterLit . Host of the award-winning @printrunpodcast . Publishers Weekly industry MVP. She/her & Ms/Mx. Open to queries!
213 MSWL
176 AskAgent
3124 Queries
162 Tips

You can talk AND sigh. You can say words that come out of you like a sigh, but notice that it is simile, not truth #pubtip #amwriting 6/?

Laura Zats
@LZats
Literary Agent
Founder & Agent @HeadwaterLit . Host of the award-winning @printrunpodcast . Publishers Weekly industry MVP. She/her & Ms/Mx. Open to queries!
213 MSWL
176 AskAgent
3124 Queries
162 Tips

You can't BREATHE a sentence. Nor can you SIGH words. Or CLUCK or any other nonsense #pubtip #amwriting 4/?

Laura Zats
@LZats
Literary Agent
Founder & Agent @HeadwaterLit . Host of the award-winning @printrunpodcast . Publishers Weekly industry MVP. She/her & Ms/Mx. Open to queries!
213 MSWL
176 AskAgent
3124 Queries
162 Tips

Notice that these tags are way your TALK. Many fiction writers INSIST on creating dialogue tags that aren't possible #amwriting #pubtip 3/?