Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips
Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips

Michele Thornton @michelethorn

@SecretAgentBri What's your favorite dark comedy in YA?
Replying to @michelethorn

One I just sold! That we will announce soon! Omg that was so unhelpful, sorry! 💩 Fave MG dark comedy is @HollyMMGrant's LEAGUE OF BEASTLY DREADFULS. Hard to come up with YA comps, what's yours? #askagent

Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips

Elizabeth Pope @elizaylottpope

@SecretAgentBri What makes you light up when you start a query letter?
Replying to @elizaylottpope

When it's well written, personally directed, and something fresh, that I haven't really seen before! #askagent

Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips

Laura Todd Carns @LauraToddCarns

@SecretAgentBri Is it an automatic turn-off if someone lists critically-acclaimed, much-buzzed-about books as comps?
Replying to @LauraToddCarns

Not necessarily, but I would definitely mix in some genre-appropriate, successful but perhaps not HUGE-huge comps. If you tell me that your book is TWILIGHT meets HARRY POTTER, I might give you just a liiiil side eye 👀 #askagent

Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips

M.E. Walker @MEWalker7

@SecretAgentBri Does YA have to have romance to be enticing? #askagent
Replying to @MEWalker7

Not necessarily, but I find a romance--or sexual exploration of some kind--often helps. It definitely doesn't have to be the central relationship! It can be a secondary, or even tertiary element. And it definitely does not have to be happily ever after. #askagent

Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips

Miri C Golden @MaryCWallis

@SecretAgentBri What’s your process for subbing to editors?Is there an established relationship? How does that all work?
Replying to @MaryCWallis

Yes ma'am! One of my favorite parts of the job is going to lunch with editors. We're all book nerds, and it's always fun. I get to know what they're looking for and try my best to deliver it #askagent

Uwe Stender
@UweStenderPhD
Literary Agent
Founder @triadaus , Literary/Film Agent. Herthaner. Berliner Schnauze. Westend. Qualität kommt von Qual. 1982,1991, 2013, 2017. Books, Films, Music. ❤ Berlin ❤
81 MSWL
1203 AskAgent
44 Queries
81 Tips

Akemi Gaines @AkashicAkemi

@UweStenderPhD It's about genre. My novels feature aliens and a few fantastical phenomena, but not the typical SF, not very scientific really. But literary fiction agents would reject bc they don't rep SFF. What to do?
Replying to @AkashicAkemi

I would stick with SFF agents, or write another book. Or just keep querying until you find the right match. Never give up. Sometimes genre is putting writers in a tough spot. So ist das Leben.

Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips

Brett Rushing @BrettRushing

@SecretAgentBri are portal fantasies dead on arrival in an agent’s inbox? #askagent
Replying to @BrettRushing

It's a crowded field, but not necessarily. If you feel yours is fresh/brings something new to the table, lead with that angle in your query letter #askagent

Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips

Kaylee Errecaborde @KayleeMyhreErre

@SecretAgentBri If we are a first time novelist and realize we started agent submissions about four drafts too early #newbie, will agents consider re-submissions?
Replying to @KayleeMyhreErre

I think so! Some of my current clients queried me with earlier drafts/books. Be up front and say "oops I initially sent this three drafts too soon, would love to have you re-consider" #askagent

Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips

A. Guillemette @AGuillemette87

@SecretAgentBri I have one question. I'm writing a YA novel with a 10 y/o protagonist. Agents keep telling me it's MG because of this, but the subject matter is DISTINCTLY not MG. It's a YA story. I can't change his age either for the story I want to tell. How would you query around this?
Replying to @AGuillemette87

That's a tough one. Teens don't typically "read down" re: protagonist age. You can get pretty dark in MG as long as there's hope, why not make it MG? Or just not include genre in your query, and trust your eventual agent to help you shape/decide? #askagent

Uwe Stender
@UweStenderPhD
Literary Agent
Founder @triadaus , Literary/Film Agent. Herthaner. Berliner Schnauze. Westend. Qualität kommt von Qual. 1982,1991, 2013, 2017. Books, Films, Music. ❤ Berlin ❤
81 MSWL
1203 AskAgent
44 Queries
81 Tips
Uwe Stender
@UweStenderPhD
Literary Agent
Founder @triadaus , Literary/Film Agent. Herthaner. Berliner Schnauze. Westend. Qualität kommt von Qual. 1982,1991, 2013, 2017. Books, Films, Music. ❤ Berlin ❤
81 MSWL
1203 AskAgent
44 Queries
81 Tips

Berinna Chambers @happywriter2017

@UweStenderPhD Also, is 1st person past tense hard to sell in MG?
Replying to @happywriter2017

I would not worry about the tense. I would focus on the plot, the story, the characters, the writing.

Uwe Stender
@UweStenderPhD
Literary Agent
Founder @triadaus , Literary/Film Agent. Herthaner. Berliner Schnauze. Westend. Qualität kommt von Qual. 1982,1991, 2013, 2017. Books, Films, Music. ❤ Berlin ❤
81 MSWL
1203 AskAgent
44 Queries
81 Tips
Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips
Uwe Stender
@UweStenderPhD
Literary Agent
Founder @triadaus , Literary/Film Agent. Herthaner. Berliner Schnauze. Westend. Qualität kommt von Qual. 1982,1991, 2013, 2017. Books, Films, Music. ❤ Berlin ❤
81 MSWL
1203 AskAgent
44 Queries
81 Tips
Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips
Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips

Tia Cristy @Tipsfromtia

@SecretAgentBri 3.14% of the time I understand the query process. I've gotten the nicest rejection letters. 'I'd buy this book, but it's not on my list', 'I love this story, but not on my list', 'I want to see you in print soon'. Q: do all agents get a similar list of upcoming trends? Thank you. pic.twitter.com/vabjAgq27B
Replying to @Tipsfromtia

Not that I know of (if they do, I'm pissed I'm not on that list!) but I DO notice funny trend bubbles in my slush. If there's lots of VERY similar published work, it can be hard envision breaking out a new author. I gotta be able to answer "what's new & different here?" #askagent

Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips

Koji @KojiADae

@SecretAgentBri If someone was querying you because one of your client's work was similar to what/how they write, how would you suggest approaching that in the query?
Replying to @KojiADae

I LOVE it when a query-er has researched my list and my fabulous clients! Definitely let me know. "I see you rep ___ and ___, and I thought you might love my work because ___" don't bury the lede, tell me right off the bat! #askagent

Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips

Melissa Priebe @mfkaelin

@SecretAgentBri What does it mean when agents ask for partial vs full manuscript? Is the partial to save time? Is there a lesson for writers here? #AskAgent
Replying to @mfkaelin

I usually ask for a partial to start and then a full if I read and love the partial. It's a natural trigger for me to be in touch with authors that I'm getting excited about and start building good communication. #askagent

Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips