Moe Ferrara

Q2. YA Fantasy. Great hook, but the plot is hard to follow. "Chosen one" stories I'm a bit pickier about, too. PASS. #TenQueries

Q1. YA - uses rhetorical questions to get the plot across. Trust me, rhetorical questions don't work on me. PASS #TenQueries

Will do another of these I'm sure! I hope this helps -- and remember to use sites like QueryTracker to polish! #querytip #tenqueries

That's 2 ACCEPTS and 8 PASSES. Always make sure those you query represent that genre! Voice in queries is SO important, too! #tenqueries

Q10: No genre, reads like upmarket. LGBTQ MC; plot doesn't speak to me. Upmarket fiction isn't often my area of expertise. PASS #tenqueries

Q9: MG superhero. Lots of voice in the query and a fun plot. Plus superheroes and time travel. ACCEPT #tenqueries

Q8: YA fantasy. Different world building, but unique. Lots of voice in the query and leaves me wanting more! ACCEPT #tenqueries

Q7: Adult Fantasy. Reading the query, this isn't a fantasy. Please don't make sure you know your genres when querying! PASS #tenqueries

Q6: Romantic suspense. Not quite my genre. The right romance, yes, but generally romantic suspense isn't for me. PASS #tenqueries

Q5: YA fantasy. Paranormal which is awesome, but vague query. Uses "unexpected events" -- please don't use this phrase! PASS #tenqueries

Q4: Adult SciFi. Query tells me what the themes are but nothing about the plot. I need to know what your book is about! PASS #tenqueries

Q3: Adult Fantasy. Now a too-brief query that only focuses on a small aspect and doesn't give me a good sense of the world. PASS #tenqueries

Q2: YA Fantasy. Very long query that is quite confusing. Don't try to cram every plot into your query! PASS #tenqueries

Q1: Erotic romance, fantasy. I'm picky about my BDSM in books and this one doesn't speak to me. Pass #tenqueries

Alllright! Time for some #tenqueries! No major details about queries to protect the authors. :^] here we go!