Jordy Albert

Q2: YA contemporary. The voice was confusing, and the pages started in the wrong place. Pass #tenqueries

Q1: scifi. The premise sounded like a mix of a couple of other novels, so unfortunately, pass. Also, wasn't 1st book in series. #tenqueries

Q10: ya sci-fi. Third person present, then switches to first, very awkward to read. Pass #tenqueries

Q9: fantasy. Lots of exposition, but I don't think it helps character, or advance the story. Pass. #tenqueries

Q8: query for novel/screenplay(?) no sample pages and we are not currently considering screenplays. Pass. #tenqueries

Q7: third person present tense...I find it awkward to read. Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: sci-fi/fantasy/dystopian (?) I felt it was difficult to relate to the main character. Pass. #tenqueries

Q5: YA sci-fi. The pages seemed to meander and made it tough for me to get invested in the story. Pass. #tenqueries

Q3: Romance. Didn't care for the writing, and I didn't feel it was a good fit for me. Pass. #tenqueries

Q2: PB. I thought this one would be difficult to sell. Pass. #tenqueries

Q1: women's fic. I felt the pace was slow, and a bit too much background info. was included in sample pages. Pass. #tenqueries

Q8: mystery. Transitions were choppy which made the pages difficult to follow. Pass. #tenqueries

Q7: myster/thriller...not my cup of tea. Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: YA more telling v showing and I couldn't relate to the characters. Pass. #tenqueries

Q5: too long and I didn't care for writing or the voice. Pass. #tenqueries

Q4: historical fic(?). Not my cup of tea, query was a but confusing (seemed like it could also be magical realism(?) Pass. #tenqueries

Q3: sci-fi (dystopian). The emotional impact is lost in first few pages bc the context hasn't really been established. Pass. #tenqueries

Q2: science fiction(?). IMHO the pages start at the wrong place, and from the query the story seems confusing. Pass. #tenqueries

Q1: historical fiction. Word count is too long and the subject isn't my cup of tea. Pass. #tenqueries

Q10: women's fiction. I didn't connect with the voice. I felt I was being talked at. Pass. #tenqueries