Jordy Albert

Q7: Thriller. The first chapter is almost all dialogue, so I never got a good sense of the setting/characters. Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: YA (paranormal). Too much like other books on the market. Pass. #tenqueries

Q5: Mystery/thriller. Sample pages were slow, and I didn't connect with the characters. Pass. #tenqueries

Q4: YA fantasy. Premise sounds interesting. The sample pages didn't show much development, unfortunately. Pass. #tenqueries

Q3: YA fantasy. I was a little confused by the query. Pages didn't really help clarify. Pass. #tenqueries

Q2: MG/YA There is a lot going on in the story and it seems a little jumbled. The voice doesn't match audience. Pass. #tenqueries

Q1: Romance. Didn't really sound like a romance from the query. Not my cup of tea. Pass. #tenqueries

Q10: Fantasy. I didn't care for the voice. The narrator is talking to the reader, which was distracting from the story. Pass. #tenqueries

Q9: Genre not specified. Query doesn't sound like my cup of tea. Pages sent as attachment. Pass. #tenqueries

Q8: genre(fantasy?). Query/sample pages are not for the first book in a series. Plz query first book. Pass. #tenqueries

Q7: PB. The premise is kind of cute, but the writing didn't really seem like it would fit a PB. Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: MG contemporary (?) The premise doesn't really seem like it's my cup of tea. Pass. #tenqueries

Q5: YA fantasy. The voice didn't feel YA to me, and the first few pages were slow & didn't keep my attention. Pass. #tenqueries

Q4: Fantasy. The first couple of pages were a bit confusing and felt a little cliché. Pass. #tenqueries

Q3: Author just sent an attachment 😞 Please don't send attachments unless requested. Thnx! Pass. #tenqueries

Q2: No genre/query info. The first couple of pages didn't grab my attention. Pass. #tenqueries

Q1: psychological thriller. This really isn't my genre/cup of tea. Pass. #tenqueries

Q10: Memoir. I'm not considering memoirs at this time. Please check submission guidelines. Pass. #tenqueries

Q9: YA/fantasy. Voice didn't suck me into the story, and the dialogue felt a little bit forced. Pass. #tenqueries.

Q8: MG.Lots of telling v. Showing. Pages sort of seem all over the place. Pass. #tenqueries.