Jordy Albert

Q9: Author attached multiple projects; no query. Description for other projects not right for me. Pass #tenqueries

Q8: Chapter book. I didn't really care for the writing style. Pass #tenqueries

Q7: YA. I didn't feel the prologue was necessary, and the opening pages were a bit confusing. Pass #tenqueries

Q6: YA. The writing has potential, but I don't feel I'm the right agent for this project. Pass #tenqueries

Q5: YA? Word count is a little short for a full YA novel. Narrative was awkward. Pass #tenqueries

Q4: YA. I felt the premise and characters were a bit weak. Pass #tenqueries

Q3: sci-fi/dystopian. Lots of telling; not a lot of character development. Word count really long. Pass #tenqueries

Q2: I'm not currently looking for non-fiction. This query didn't seem non-fiction though. Pass #tenqueries

Q1: YA. Premise wasn't my cup of tea, and no sample pages. Pass #tenqueries

Q6: Narrative, voice, dialogue didn't feel natural. Pass #tenqueries

Q5: Pace was slow and I didn't feel like much happened that moves the story forward. Pass #tenqueries

Q4: YA contemporary. Dark subject matter & the sample pages were heavy. Pass #tenqueries

Q3: YA sci-fi. Prologue wasn't necessary&could have been introduced in chapter1. Imagery felt familiar. Pass #tenqueries

Q2: Sci-fi/fantasy. Pages were confusing & difficult to follow. Pass #tenqueries

Q1: YA contemporary. The writing isn't bad, but for me the voice is a bit off for YA & pages felt too oppressive. Pass #tenqueries

Q10: Genre (?) The subject matter doesn't appeal to me. Pass #tenqueries

Q9: Genre isn't my cup of tea. Pass #tenqueries

Q8: Sci-fi. The pages were a little heavy on description, and seemed to jump around a lot. Pass #tenqueries

Q7: Genre (?)-self-help (?). Non-fiction (?). Not a fan of the writing and no query. Pass #tenqueries

Q6: Genre (?). Lots of backstory/exposition, and I just didn't care for the writing. Pass #tenqueries