Jordy Albert

Q7: contemporary romance. I didn’t connect with the main character. Pass #tenqueries

Q6: Contemporary romance. I didn’t connect with the writing and the premise wasn’t really my cup of tea. Pass #tenqueries

Q5: speculative. Prologue seems unnecessary-nothing really happened, and it felt disconnected from first chapter. Pass #tenqueries

Q4: fantasy (longish). Voice felt detached, and the pacing was slow. Pass #tenqueries

Q3: fantasy. Pages were confusing and the opening felt a bit cliché. Pass #tenqueries

Q2: MG or YA(?) I didn’t care for the voice/writing. Pass #tenqueries

Q1: historical, word count is waaaay too long. Premise isn’t really for me. Pass #tenqueries

Q10: Triller. Pacing was a little uneven at times, some telling & info dumping. Premise wasn't my cup of tea. Pass #tenqueries

Q9: Author attached multiple projects; no query. Description for other projects not right for me. Pass #tenqueries

Q8: Chapter book. I didn't really care for the writing style. Pass #tenqueries

Q7: YA. I didn't feel the prologue was necessary, and the opening pages were a bit confusing. Pass #tenqueries

Q6: YA. The writing has potential, but I don't feel I'm the right agent for this project. Pass #tenqueries

Q5: YA? Word count is a little short for a full YA novel. Narrative was awkward. Pass #tenqueries

Q4: YA. I felt the premise and characters were a bit weak. Pass #tenqueries

Q3: sci-fi/dystopian. Lots of telling; not a lot of character development. Word count really long. Pass #tenqueries

Q2: I'm not currently looking for non-fiction. This query didn't seem non-fiction though. Pass #tenqueries

Q1: YA. Premise wasn't my cup of tea, and no sample pages. Pass #tenqueries

Q6: Narrative, voice, dialogue didn't feel natural. Pass #tenqueries

Q5: Pace was slow and I didn't feel like much happened that moves the story forward. Pass #tenqueries

Q4: YA contemporary. Dark subject matter & the sample pages were heavy. Pass #tenqueries