Jordy Albert

Q3: YA sci-fi. Prologue wasn't necessary&could have been introduced in chapter1. Imagery felt familiar. Pass #tenqueries

Q2: Sci-fi/fantasy. Pages were confusing & difficult to follow. Pass #tenqueries

Q1: YA contemporary. The writing isn't bad, but for me the voice is a bit off for YA & pages felt too oppressive. Pass #tenqueries

Q10: Genre (?) The subject matter doesn't appeal to me. Pass #tenqueries

Q9: Genre isn't my cup of tea. Pass #tenqueries

Q8: Sci-fi. The pages were a little heavy on description, and seemed to jump around a lot. Pass #tenqueries

Q7: Genre (?)-self-help (?). Non-fiction (?). Not a fan of the writing and no query. Pass #tenqueries

Q6: Genre (?). Lots of backstory/exposition, and I just didn't care for the writing. Pass #tenqueries

Q5: YA (sci-fi/fantasy). WC on the long side. Query/synopsis way too long. No context in opening pages so I was confused. Pass #tenqueries

Q4: Genre (?). Not addressed to anyone. No query, and sent sample pages as an attachment. Pass #tenqueries

Q3: Query just addressed to "Agent" 😞please specify who you're querying. Query was confusing. Pass #tenqueries

Q2: Historical. Premise didn't appeal to me and the pages didn't pull me into the story. Pass #tenqueries

Q1: Previously published books are difficult to place. Premise wasn't really my cup of tea. Pass #tenqueries

Q10: Lots of backstory/info dump... didn't care much for the characters. Pass #tenqueries

Q9: No query/sample pages, but asked if we'd be interested in representing. Pass #tenqueries

Q8: No query; opens with pages. Pass #tenqueries

Q7: MG fantasy. Premise sounds interesting, and pages held my interest. Request #tenqueries

Q6: MG. The voice felt like it was trying too hard to be MG. Pass #tenqueries

Q5: Genre not specified. Sounds like thriller/horror. Not addressed to anyone & no sample pages. Pass #tenqueries

Q4: Children's. No sample pages. Please be sure to check guidelines. Pass #tenqueries