Jordy Albert

Q3: Romance. Didn't care for the writing, and I didn't feel it was a good fit for me. Pass. #tenqueries

Q2: PB. I thought this one would be difficult to sell. Pass. #tenqueries

Q1: women's fic. I felt the pace was slow, and a bit too much background info. was included in sample pages. Pass. #tenqueries

Q8: mystery. Transitions were choppy which made the pages difficult to follow. Pass. #tenqueries

Q7: myster/thriller...not my cup of tea. Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: YA more telling v showing and I couldn't relate to the characters. Pass. #tenqueries

Q5: too long and I didn't care for writing or the voice. Pass. #tenqueries

Q4: historical fic(?). Not my cup of tea, query was a but confusing (seemed like it could also be magical realism(?) Pass. #tenqueries

Q3: sci-fi (dystopian). The emotional impact is lost in first few pages bc the context hasn't really been established. Pass. #tenqueries

Q2: science fiction(?). IMHO the pages start at the wrong place, and from the query the story seems confusing. Pass. #tenqueries

Q1: historical fiction. Word count is too long and the subject isn't my cup of tea. Pass. #tenqueries

Q10: women's fiction. I didn't connect with the voice. I felt I was being talked at. Pass. #tenqueries

Q9: thriller. Not really my cup of tea, and there weren't any sample pages included. Pass. #tenqueries

Q8: romance. I didn't feel that I'd be able to connect with the characters. Pass. #tenqueries

Q7: ya. I didn't connect with the story. Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: ya sf. Lots of detail/description that don't really help move the pages forward. Pass. #tenqueries

Q5: romantic suspense. More telling v showing and the pace was slow. Pass. #tenqueries

Q4: fantasy(?). Author sent full manuscript. Please check our submission guidelines. Pass. #tenqueries

Q3: fantasy. Pages were difficult to follow & seemed to be all over the place. Pass. #tenqueries

Q2: ya fantasy. There was too much description & voice didn't feel YA. Pass. #tenqueries