Colleen Oefelein
@eerie_o
Literary Agent
Literary Agent MacGregor & Luedeke Lit Christian Disabled Veteran PTSD warrior Penn State alum Also Author CM McCoy: EERIE Loves Irish dance, space & Pokemon
27 MSWL
2 AskAgent
14 Tips

Editing tip:

Avoid double-writing. Don't explain what your words show.

Ex:
She couldn't contain her excitement. She sprinted across the street and tackle-hugged him. -> She sprinted across the street and tackle-hugged him.

Much more better πŸ‘

#writingcommuity
#querytip

Emmy Nordstrom Higdon
@_saskeah
Literary Agent
πŸ“š lit agent @WCA_LitAgency πŸ“– advisor @TheFOLD_ ✍ faculty @MSWLMA πŸ•β€πŸ¦Ί recovering PhD 🌈 they/them; Sal: Dr. β™Ώ clients #SpineSquad πŸ“˜
178 MSWL
12 Queries
71 Tips

#QueryTip: I have gotten a bunch of queries lately for books that have already been self-published or posted for free online, or that are about to be. Except in very rare cases, that means that the book isn't eligible for submission to publishers, and therefore, I can't rep it!

Colleen Oefelein
@eerie_o
Literary Agent
Literary Agent MacGregor & Luedeke Lit Christian Disabled Veteran PTSD warrior Penn State alum Also Author CM McCoy: EERIE Loves Irish dance, space & Pokemon
27 MSWL
2 AskAgent
14 Tips

Editing tip of the day:

Remove β€œbegan to” and β€œstarted to” for your MS. Use the verb that follows.

Ex:

The sky started to glisten. β€”> The sky glistened.

Much stronger πŸ‘

#querytip
#amquerying
#WritingCommunity
#writerslift
#authorlife

Lauren Spieller
@laurenspieller
Literary Agent
LitAgent @FolioLiterary + @FolioJr - Full Adult + Kidlit wishlist on Pub Marketplace! ~ Author w/ S&S ~ I love dogs like it's my job ~ She/Her
631 MSWL
98 AskAgent
2 Queries
91 Tips

#QueryTip: check your spam. I've noticed that my replies--requests and rejections--are occasionally not received, which creates confusion and angst! Make sure you're checking your spam at least once a week!

Jessica Faust
@BookEndsJessica
Literary Agent
President & founder of BookEnds Literary Agency, author advocate, optimist, & professional pain in the ass. Runs on coffee, wine, & kettlebells. She/Her
396 MSWL
574 AskAgent
191 Tips

A week ago @jmcgowanbks & I did a video on whether to Query in December youtu.be/k3NPk-i2_7U I'm still getting a ton & I'm not all that hungry this month (I will be in January). Therefore, I'm rejecting more. Just a hint. #querytip

Emmy Nordstrom Higdon
@_saskeah
Literary Agent
πŸ“š lit agent @WCA_LitAgency πŸ“– advisor @TheFOLD_ ✍ faculty @MSWLMA πŸ•β€πŸ¦Ί recovering PhD 🌈 they/them; Sal: Dr. β™Ώ clients #SpineSquad πŸ“˜
178 MSWL
12 Queries
71 Tips

This is more of a general #WritingTip than a #QueryTip, but the terms "sociopath" and "psychopath" are outdated, ableist psychological terms that stigmatize people with psychiatric disabilities that can be diagnosed as personality disorders. Stop using them.

Emmy Nordstrom Higdon
@_saskeah
Literary Agent
πŸ“š lit agent @WCA_LitAgency πŸ“– advisor @TheFOLD_ ✍ faculty @MSWLMA πŸ•β€πŸ¦Ί recovering PhD 🌈 they/them; Sal: Dr. β™Ώ clients #SpineSquad πŸ“˜
178 MSWL
12 Queries
71 Tips

#QueryTip: I ask with my whole heart that before you query me, you read my MSWL and my agency's submission guidelines. It will save so much energy on your part and mine, and we all need that.

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wcaltd.com/submission-gui…

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Still pending queries? (as in, the Maybe Pile) - 143

Offers extended - 12

Offers accepted - 5

Offers pending - 1

Total queries received in 2020 so far - 2,744
(basically, 57 queries a week average, but also closed for a few months)
#amagenting #querytip #amquerying

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

NA (cont)

Historical Fantasy - 7 received/passed
Historical Romance - 1 received/passed
Sci Fi - 33 received/passed
Urban Fantasy - 17 received/passed
#amagenting #querytip #amquerying

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

NA

Contemporary - 26 received/passed
Cont Romance - 36 received/3 requested
Fantasy - 80 received/1 requested
Historical - 7 received/passed
#amagenting #querytip #amquerying

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

YA (cont)

Cont Romance - 60 received/4 requested
Hist Fantasy - 22 received/passed
Para Romance - 46 received/4 requested
Urban Fantasy - 58 received/3 requested
#amagenting #querytip #amquerying

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

YA

Horror - 11 received/passed
Cont Fantasy - 62 received/9 requested
Contemporary - 171 received/20 requested
Fantasy - 409 received/23 requested
Historical - 67 received/5 requested
Sci Fi - 72 received/2 requested
#amagenting #querytip #amquerying

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

MG (cont)

Hist Fantasy - 10 received/passed
Paranormal - 28 received/3 requested
Urban Fantasy - 12 received/passed

Graphic Novels (all ages) - 45 received/12 requested
#amagenting #querytip #amquerying

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

MG

Horror - 11 received/passed
Cont Fantasy - 26 received/1 requested
Contemporary - 80 received/8 requested
Fantasy - 164 received/16 requested
Historical - 35 received/2 requested
Mystery - 9 received/passed
Sci Fi - 39 received/1 requested
#amagenting #querytip #amquerying

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Adult (cont)

Hist Fantasy - 50 received/3 requested
Hist Romance - 29 received/3 requested
Para Romance - 27 received/1 requested
Sci Fi - 204 received/5 requested
Urban Fantasy - 70 received/passed
Women's Fic - 68 receied/2 requested
#amagenting #querytip #amquerying

Kaitlyn Johnson
@RedPenKaitlyn
Literary Agent
Agent @belcastr . insta: kjbelcastro. Freelance Editor. Serial comma for life. She/her. Query at QueryManager.com/1147
279 MSWL
345 AskAgent
55 Queries
385 Tips

Kaitlyn Johnson @RedPenKaitlyn

Alright, all. It's that time of year!

Time for QUERY BOX STATS!!!
#amagenting #querytip #amquerying pic.twitter.com/WkFSPBuBrs

Adult

Horror - 20 received/passed
Contemporary - 55 received/4 requested
Con Fantasy - 79 received/3 requested
Con Romance - 141 received/11 requested
Fantasy - 320 received/5 requested
Historical - 37 received/7 requested
#amagenting #querytip #amquerying

Dan Cramer
@FlanneryLitera1
Literary Agent
Associate Lit Agent. I go by Dan. PB/MG/YA Please follow submission guidelines. Thanks πŸ³οΈβ€πŸŒˆ he/him A book can inspire a child. A child can inspire the world.
19 MSWL
22 AskAgent
16 Tips

Most agencies are closing to queries for the holidays. Take this time to refine your query, work on your hook, and research agents for the new year!

#amquerying #querytip #writerscommunity

Dan Cramer
@FlanneryLitera1
Literary Agent
Associate Lit Agent. I go by Dan. PB/MG/YA Please follow submission guidelines. Thanks πŸ³οΈβ€πŸŒˆ he/him A book can inspire a child. A child can inspire the world.
19 MSWL
22 AskAgent
16 Tips

Query Tip: Not so much a tip but thoughts. A bad query doesn't stop me from reading the submission. But, a good query gets me pumped to read the submission.
#amquerying #querytip #writerscommunity

Amelia Appel
@AmeliaLAppel
Literary Agent
Literary Agent @triadaus . Always learning. Love all things sports. When not reading, likely running. Or downing a dozen donuts in one sitting. She/Her
35 MSWL
27 Tips

#querytip: Be specific! So many queries are too vague and focus more on comps/tone/experience than the actual story. If I read your query and still don’t know what your project is about, I have no basis to request more. Not a bad idea to see if a cp can help before querying 😊

Emmy Nordstrom Higdon
@_saskeah
Literary Agent
πŸ“š lit agent @WCA_LitAgency πŸ“– advisor @TheFOLD_ ✍ faculty @MSWLMA πŸ•β€πŸ¦Ί recovering PhD 🌈 they/them; Sal: Dr. β™Ώ clients #SpineSquad πŸ“˜
178 MSWL
12 Queries
71 Tips

#QueryTip: Yall, I really don't consider queries over 100K words, I'm sorry! If you are an epic writer who's going into 100K+ territory, that's rad - but I'm not the agent for you! #WritingCommunity