Rhetorical questions often don't work in queries. Never with me. They're a pet peeve. #querytip

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#querytip: don't get meta. You're right: I HAVE seen it all...except your book. Tell me about your book, not about how boring queries are!

It is not appropriate to comment on an an agent's appearance in a query, period. Regardless of your (well meaning) intentions. #pubtip

Sorry, but no one cares in what grade you started writing. #querytip

"Please consider representing my book with the goal of getting a movie option" = still not an effective pitch. Sigh. #querytip

#QueryFail = "the first 10 pages of my book are boring so I included chapter 10 instead."

Consistently surprised how often new authors open their novels with a dream. Risk jerking the pace around upon wake up. #writetip #querytip

Old hat for savvy writers, but had 3 subs today w/ unnecessary prologues that weighed down the oh-so-important opening. #writetip #queryfail

#querytip How seriously would you take someone who didn't take the time to learn your name before approaching you in a professional setting?

And, as a general rule, dissing other books or entire genres in query letters is frowned upon. #querytip

Also I really recommend NOT telling me that your book has zero commercial appeal. #querytip

Describing your writing skills instead of your story is not a good use of your query letter. #querytip

You're setting yourself up for rejection by telling me your book will outsell Harry Potter and then your writing doesn't deliver. #queryfail

DO pitch a book. DO pitch a book as standalone with series potential. DO NOT pitch a series in one fell swoop. #querytip

General #querytip/#pubtip on genre/age: Think where you want readers to find it on the shelf. THAT is your genre/age group. #BookEndsChat

General #querytip/#pubtip on genre/age: Think where you want readers to find it on the shelf. THAT is your genre/age group. #BookEndsChat

An agent or editor should never be your first reader. #pubtip

Regarding rejections #querytip We have signed clients that received #pass on initial queried work. #KeeptheFaith Keep writing.Writers write

#querytip I'm not saying don't name your protagonist after yourself, but.

But.