Beth Phelan
@beth_phelan
Literary Agent
she/her. mg & ya literary agent @galltzackerlit . founder 501c3 NPO @_DiverseVoices (#DVpit/#DVart, DVcon &more). closed to unsolicited submissions.
128 MSWL
125 AskAgent
27 Tips

Moon @__soleilune

@beth_phelan ! #askDVpit twitter.com/__soleilune/st…
Replying to @__soleilune

a unique situation, so i think there probs isn't a norm re word limit--depends how much it takes to tell the story well. re illos, i think you want a variety of samples done, some sketches, but wouldn't need to have everything #askDVpit

Stephanie Guerdan
@captainsteph
Assistant Editor
thanks for vibing and keeping it tight. always on my mobile. assoc editor @HarperChildrens . steward of @hcpunion . podcast host @CharacterRev . opinions my own.
31 MSWL
11 AskAgent

Moon @__soleilune

@beth_phelan ! #askDVpit twitter.com/__soleilune/st…

I think this sort of thing would be challenging in YA now as we're not seeing strong anthology sales even when big authors are attached. That said, if you were submitting, the ms should be done but you can just have sample illustrations (rather than all finished) #askdvpit

Ali Fisher
@AliFisher
Editor
An good editer. On some podcasts. Mostly inactive/retweets. Opinions are mine. she/her 📸 by Zack DeZon
10 MSWL
5 AskAgent

Naomi Craig @theslyeagle

#askDVpit How bad a sign is it when you only get form rejections, even after an MS request?
Replying to @theslyeagle

Not bad! Getting a ms request is a great sign, but agents can't always take the time they want to take to offer specific feedback in their rejections. Keep submitting! #askDVpit

Saba Sulaiman
@agentsaba
Literary Agent
Senior agent at Talcott Notch Literary. Eternally recovering from maternity leave. Probably hiding somewhere eating cake. Closed to unsolicited queries. @pocpub
131 MSWL
7 AskAgent
2 Queries
47 Tips

S.I. Ryder @SIRyder2

#askDVpit is it important to include comparable titles in the query letter? Can you skip it or is that a bad idea?
Replying to @SIRyder2

good comps are great + bad comps are worse than no comps (imho) no comps are totally fine if you're genuinely struggling to position it b/c a bad comp -> a poor impression. also feel free to use tv shows/movies if they can speak effectively to an aspect of your project #askDVpit

Stephanie Guerdan
@captainsteph
Assistant Editor
thanks for vibing and keeping it tight. always on my mobile. assoc editor @HarperChildrens . steward of @hcpunion . podcast host @CharacterRev . opinions my own.
31 MSWL
11 AskAgent

S.I. Ryder @SIRyder2

#askDVpit is it important to include comparable titles in the query letter? Can you skip it or is that a bad idea?

Not an agent myself, but imo using comp titles shows that you're familiar with the target market and already have a sense of where your book will sit when it's published, which is a good thing to signal. #askdvpit

Rebecca Kuss
@reebsthereader
Editor
senior editor @ rick riordan presents+disney hyperion. @DVpit_ program manager. 🇰🇷✡️. she/her.
52 MSWL
7 AskAgent

Ashwin 🔱 @AshwinWijay

As publishing is a business, along with a strong manuscript how important is the author themselves when sealing a deal? Like whether it be their marketability or social media influence, is it a bonus or a crucial aspect? #askDVpit
Replying to @AshwinWijay

in between? social media is a great place to connect with readers so i love to see authors who do this! but when considering a submission, i definitely check out the author's social media presence, but at the end of the day nothing is more important than the writing! #askDVpit

Beth Phelan
@beth_phelan
Literary Agent
she/her. mg & ya literary agent @galltzackerlit . founder 501c3 NPO @_DiverseVoices (#DVpit/#DVart, DVcon &more). closed to unsolicited submissions.
128 MSWL
125 AskAgent
27 Tips

kerine. @KayAyDoubleU

I'm interested in publishing a short story collection and would like to know what agents look for in query letters and if having published stories is a plus if I have no previous book publishing experience? #askDVpit
Replying to @KayAyDoubleU

i would look for overall theme of the collection/what makes it a collection, and what the collection wants to convey. definitely helps if you already have short stories published, and i personally would like to see an unpublished sample and your biblio. #askDVpit

Stephanie Guerdan
@captainsteph
Assistant Editor
thanks for vibing and keeping it tight. always on my mobile. assoc editor @HarperChildrens . steward of @hcpunion . podcast host @CharacterRev . opinions my own.
31 MSWL
11 AskAgent
Stephanie Guerdan
@captainsteph
Assistant Editor
thanks for vibing and keeping it tight. always on my mobile. assoc editor @HarperChildrens . steward of @hcpunion . podcast host @CharacterRev . opinions my own.
31 MSWL
11 AskAgent

Emily F. Johnson @LifeMoreSweet

#askDVpit Would my graphic novel be considered #OwnVoices when I'm Native American and my characters are the equivalent of Native people in a fantasy world?

Similar to another answer I gave, but I'd trust someone from a specific culture to adapt their culture sensitively to a fantasy setting than I would someone who's an outsider, which to me means the author's identity is crucial to the storytelling and thus ownvoices #askdvpit

Lauren Abramo
@LaurenAbramo
Literary Agent
VP, Literary Agent, & Rights Director at @DGandBTweets she/her
62 MSWL
8 AskAgent
4 Tips
Saba Sulaiman
@agentsaba
Literary Agent
Senior agent at Talcott Notch Literary. Eternally recovering from maternity leave. Probably hiding somewhere eating cake. Closed to unsolicited queries. @pocpub
131 MSWL
7 AskAgent
2 Queries
47 Tips

Katrina🍜 / Bambi 🍡 @bambiATwork

What's the usual time table and process (workflow) to expect after a writer signs with an agent? #askDVpit
Replying to @bambiATwork

every agent's process/timeline is different -- to get the best sense, ask a wide range of pubbed authors what their timelines were like! not a satisfying answer, i'm afraid, but this is an industry dependent on a lot of free labor and creative productivity so it varies #askDVpit

Ali Fisher
@AliFisher
Editor
An good editer. On some podcasts. Mostly inactive/retweets. Opinions are mine. she/her 📸 by Zack DeZon
10 MSWL
5 AskAgent

Peter Wayne @peterwaynebooks

I queried my manuscript a few times; however, since then, I have gone through severe development edits to make the story more diverse and unique than the one I previously queried.

What would you recommend doing when it comes to querying the same agents again?

#askdvpit
Replying to @peterwaynebooks

Fantastic! Sounds like you've grown as a writer. If any of the agents said in their rejections they're interested in seeing a revision, get back to them and let them know what you've revised. If not, it's time to research new agents or get to work on something new #askDVpit

Lauren Abramo
@LaurenAbramo
Literary Agent
VP, Literary Agent, & Rights Director at @DGandBTweets she/her
62 MSWL
8 AskAgent
4 Tips

Bridget⁉️🌹 @CuriousArtemis

Why is it crucial that all comps be contemporary? For example, if I'm pitching a queer fantasy Jane Eyre, would it not make sense to mention JE in the pitch? #askDVpit

The purpose of a comp is to say "We know this book is marketable b/c X recently published title sold well." It doesn't mean you shouldn't mention JE (you should if you're adapting it!), but your comps would be other recently published adaptations, not JE itself. #askDVpit

Rebecca Kuss
@reebsthereader
Editor
senior editor @ rick riordan presents+disney hyperion. @DVpit_ program manager. 🇰🇷✡️. she/her.
52 MSWL
7 AskAgent
Saba Sulaiman
@agentsaba
Literary Agent
Senior agent at Talcott Notch Literary. Eternally recovering from maternity leave. Probably hiding somewhere eating cake. Closed to unsolicited queries. @pocpub
131 MSWL
7 AskAgent
2 Queries
47 Tips

JaQuette Gilbert @mrsjpgilbert

When pitching a children's PB, is there a particular format that editors prefer? I currently have it organized by pages that I'd like to have side-by-side. #askDVpit
Replying to @mrsjpgilbert

i just send PB manuscript as straight narratives, unpaginated, with the words meant to go on each page separated by paragraphs -- i'm curious to hear what others think though since i'm fairly new at this #askDVpit

Stephanie Guerdan
@captainsteph
Assistant Editor
thanks for vibing and keeping it tight. always on my mobile. assoc editor @HarperChildrens . steward of @hcpunion . podcast host @CharacterRev . opinions my own.
31 MSWL
11 AskAgent

Evalyn_Broderick @EvalynBroderick

If I have an #ownvoices Jewish book BUT it's sci-fi so it involves the version of Judaism I think will be practiced far in the future is this a crazy turn off and/or no longer ownvoices?
#askDVpit

Hm, this is tricky, but in my experience I'd trust a writer from that background to sensitively predict how the religion/culture will adapt far more than I would a writer who wasn't, so imo your identity would still be imp't to the story and I'd still call it ownvoices. #askdvpit

Rebecca Kuss
@reebsthereader
Editor
senior editor @ rick riordan presents+disney hyperion. @DVpit_ program manager. 🇰🇷✡️. she/her.
52 MSWL
7 AskAgent
Stephanie Guerdan
@captainsteph
Assistant Editor
thanks for vibing and keeping it tight. always on my mobile. assoc editor @HarperChildrens . steward of @hcpunion . podcast host @CharacterRev . opinions my own.
31 MSWL
11 AskAgent

Isaac O. Daramola😊 @IsaacDaraWrites

#askDVpit

I really want to get the concept of a statement like: 'acquired north-american rights' to a book. Does that mean the author can go on to pitch the already worked-on final draft to other agents in, let's say, Europe or Africa?

So your agent typically represents you in all territories, and their agency will handle subrights deals overseas/outside North Am. That kind of statement usually refers the actual book deal with a publisher, which may only cover certain markets. #askdvpit

Saba Sulaiman
@agentsaba
Literary Agent
Senior agent at Talcott Notch Literary. Eternally recovering from maternity leave. Probably hiding somewhere eating cake. Closed to unsolicited queries. @pocpub
131 MSWL
7 AskAgent
2 Queries
47 Tips

Mahtab Rohan🌧 @WriterRohan

How are we supposed to write authentic #ownvoices stories while still appealing to the sensibilities of an overwhelming white industry?

If we don't succeed, how do we know if it's bc of our writing or bc ppl truly couldn't "connect" to it?

#askdvpit

you can't really know when the "did not connect" feedback you get is genuine, esp. from someone who doesn't share your marginalized ID, that's why it's so tough to parse rejections. keep sharing your work with people who you trust, and just hang in there, we need you to #askDVpit

Lauren Abramo
@LaurenAbramo
Literary Agent
VP, Literary Agent, & Rights Director at @DGandBTweets she/her
62 MSWL
8 AskAgent
4 Tips

Isaac O. Daramola😊 @IsaacDaraWrites

#askDVpit

I really want to get the concept of a statement like: 'acquired north-american rights' to a book. Does that mean the author can go on to pitch the already worked-on final draft to other agents in, let's say, Europe or Africa?

It generally means that the author reserved rights to the book in English outside the US/Can and all translation rights. AKA the publisher in the US doesn't have them. But if an agent did that deal, they prob rep those rights too and will seek deals in other markets. #askDVpit