Mary C. Moore
@Mary_C_Moore
Literary Agent
Literary Agent
110 MSWL
42 AskAgent
222 Tips

A lot of "magic is banned, protagonist has magic," in the current slush. Not necessarily bad, but be aware of its commonality. #querytip

Mary C. Moore
@Mary_C_Moore
Literary Agent
Literary Agent
110 MSWL
42 AskAgent
222 Tips

Don't state in your query, "I've written x because there isn't any x in the genre." That just shows you haven't read enough. #querytip

Mary C. Moore
@Mary_C_Moore
Literary Agent
Literary Agent
110 MSWL
42 AskAgent
222 Tips

Double proof your queries before sending! I got one addressed "Dear [xxxxx]" (always be wary of the cut 'n' paste). #querytip

Mary C. Moore
@Mary_C_Moore
Literary Agent
Literary Agent
110 MSWL
42 AskAgent
222 Tips

I do not represent screenplays. Wouldn't even know what to do. Pitching me one is a waste of yours and my time. #querytip #queryfail

Mary C. Moore
@Mary_C_Moore
Literary Agent
Literary Agent
110 MSWL
42 AskAgent
222 Tips

My latest: Do Literary Agents Reject Your Submission After Reading One Line? marycmoore.com/index.php/2017… #querytip #askagent #writetip

Mary C. Moore
@Mary_C_Moore
Literary Agent
Literary Agent
110 MSWL
42 AskAgent
222 Tips
Mary C. Moore
@Mary_C_Moore
Literary Agent
Literary Agent
110 MSWL
42 AskAgent
222 Tips

This may be just me, but I really really don't like it when a query tells me how I'm going to feel about the book. #querytip

Mary C. Moore
@Mary_C_Moore
Literary Agent
Literary Agent
110 MSWL
42 AskAgent
222 Tips

When you tell me you have a screenplay of your ms, I interpret that as movie not book is your ultimate goal. Pass. #querytip

Mary C. Moore
@Mary_C_Moore
Literary Agent
Literary Agent
110 MSWL
42 AskAgent
222 Tips

So weird to read queries I can sense are thinly veiled autobiographies. All us writers do it, but don't make it so obvious.😏 #querytip

Mary C. Moore
@Mary_C_Moore
Literary Agent
Literary Agent
110 MSWL
42 AskAgent
222 Tips
Mary C. Moore
@Mary_C_Moore
Literary Agent
Literary Agent
110 MSWL
42 AskAgent
222 Tips
Mary C. Moore
@Mary_C_Moore
Literary Agent
Literary Agent
110 MSWL
42 AskAgent
222 Tips

Writer Dudettes and Dudes. If you use my email instead of sub form, your query will be buried under other business emails. #querytip

Mary C. Moore
@Mary_C_Moore
Literary Agent
Literary Agent
110 MSWL
42 AskAgent
222 Tips
Mary C. Moore
@Mary_C_Moore
Literary Agent
Literary Agent
110 MSWL
42 AskAgent
222 Tips

Now if you state you're a talented writer in your query, (or how great your story is) I may not be so keen to read more. (2/2) #querytip

Mary C. Moore
@Mary_C_Moore
Literary Agent
Literary Agent
110 MSWL
42 AskAgent
222 Tips

FYI, if I state you're a talented writer in my rejection, I mean it. I just wasn't the right agent for that project. #querytip #slushpile

Mary C. Moore
@Mary_C_Moore
Literary Agent
Literary Agent
110 MSWL
42 AskAgent
222 Tips

Writers. If you've accepted an offer of representation, do inform other agents you've queried. Please and thank you! #querytip

Mary C. Moore
@Mary_C_Moore
Literary Agent
Literary Agent
110 MSWL
42 AskAgent
222 Tips

Writers, a gentle reminder. Pitching/including the cover of your novel is a waste of time and detrimental to your case. #querytip #pubtip

Mary C. Moore
@Mary_C_Moore
Literary Agent
Literary Agent
110 MSWL
42 AskAgent
222 Tips

An author had one line in their bio, "I am an avid reader." And I thought, "huh, that works for me." #slushpile #querytip

Mary C. Moore
@Mary_C_Moore
Literary Agent
Literary Agent
110 MSWL
42 AskAgent
222 Tips

Avoid telling the agent how they will interpret your story in your query. Each reader will have a different experience. #querytip #askagent

Mary C. Moore
@Mary_C_Moore
Literary Agent
Literary Agent
110 MSWL
42 AskAgent
222 Tips

Query needs to convince the agent:
-to read the pgs
-you're the right person to tell the story
-they are perfect agent for it
#Querytip