#QueryTip DON'T start your query with a series of philosophical questions. Just get to the story.

So put on your pajamas and your thickest skin and come hang out with me, shred your query letter, and make it shine. #amquerying #querytip

Guys, following instructions is important. #amagenting #querytip

#PitMad is coming up! If/when you get requests, you'll need to send a GREAT query. May I suggest checking this out first? #querytip

#QueryTip Don't: Last query had MC w/same full name as another agent. Is author changing name to match agent & messed up. Don't do this

Even good queries get many No's. Don't take it personally.
That's hard 2 do, but this is a business even tho UR book is UR baby #QueryTip

Rec'd thread. Very common #amquerying problem. Agents make decision on 1st pages b/c we know biz not b/c we're mean. We're not! #querytip

#TipTuesday: Your #QueryLetter doesn't need to mention that ur querying me, that you’re seeking representation, etc. It's implied. #QueryTip

#TipTuesday: There are better ways to start your #queryletter than narrating a rhetorical conversation with me. #querytip

Pg 102 of your book is just as important as first & last page. Don't let the middle of your book sag or drag. Keep it interesting. #PubTip

#QueryTip If you receive constructive feedback from an agent at a conference, don't query the next day. Revise first. Send your best work.

Pet peeve: Queries that begin with,"imagine you live in a world where..." Instead, describe your characters' experiences #querytip

#querystats update: I've responded to all queries sent in May & am moving on to June.
Total queries: 375
Total requests: 4 (3 YA; 1 MG)

Query and Synopsis Critiques Available! Let's make your submission shine #amquerying #querytip #amediting #amwriting kjohnsonfreelance.com

Am beginning to think that if you mention J.K. Rowling, your query letter needs revision. #pubtip

I've read all MS requested thru July, & all queries thru Aug. Plz note I'm still closed to queries unless req'd thru a con #querystats

ICYMI, I had a lot to say about writing queries over the weekend. #QueryTip #TriadaTip

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I do not represent screenplays. Wouldn't even know what to do. Pitching me one is a waste of yours and my time. #querytip #queryfail

Also, if it helps, you can check out these summary-writing guidelines I wrote up a few years ago. laurenspieller.com/2012/11/29/the… #QueryTip

Any questions? #QueryTip