Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q5: Fantasy. This reading I give this query gives the story racial undertones, and this isn't an #ownvoices author so it doesn't quite work. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q4: Science Fiction. The premise here is interesting but it's just not speaking to me. It's a little bit dystopian in a way that I'm not really drawn to. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q3: Fantasy. I'm not sure what this is really about, the query is too concise and I have no idea what the fantasy elements are. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q2: Romance. This seems to be more Women's Fiction than Romance, and while I do consider WF, I have very specific things I'm looking for that isn't quite this. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q1: YA Fantasy. This dark fairy tale retelling has an interesting premise, but it also has a talking animal, which isn't my jam. I think if it were a fantastic creature I'd be more willing to go along with it. Pass. #tenqueries

Jordy Albert
@bluedragonfly81
Literary Agent
Literary Agent @BookerAlbertLit | Lover of dogs, books, and tea. Total fangirl. #mugiwarapirates #worldpeace
20 MSWL
1 AskAgent
341 Queries
24 Tips

Q7: YA fantasy. Pacing didn鈥檛 feel consistent and I felt it was difficult to follow what was happening. Pass #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q10: Science Fiction: A global pandemic eliminated the Earth's population鈥攁nd no thank you. These are not the kinds of stories I am interested in at the moment. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q9: YA Historical: I'm very selective about the historical YA I consider, and I'd say I'm most interested in feminist narratives from the late Victorian/Gilded Age/early 20th century; this isn't that. It has a male MC and is Civil War-era. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q8: YA Fantasy: The MC is 13, which puts this in MG age range, not YA. Word count is too high for MG Fantasy though. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q7: Romantic Suspense: If I can't figure out who the love interest is from the query, it's usually a sign that this isn't for me. Nor do I know what the suspense is about. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q6: MG Fantasy: This was submitted as YA, but it's MG and I don't rep MG. But even WORSE, the query is done in the MC's voice. Please don't do this, #amquering authors, it's the actual WORST. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q5: Science Fiction: This is described as tantric sci-fi. I don't know what that means. Everything I Google comes up with tantric sex & I don't think that's it, more research has me thinking it's Hindu/Buddhist ideals? I shouldn't have to think this hard abt it. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q4: Science Fiction: This was addressed to @HerringAli, oopsies! No big deal, it happens, but be careful #amquerying authors some agents may auto-reject. This one is more police procedural over science fiction, which isn't the greatest fit for me. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q3: Thriller: This was submitted as YA mystery, but I think it's actually an adult thriller, which I don't represent unless there is a strong romantic element, which I don't think this has. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q2: Historical Fantasy: MC wakes up on page 1 it's not until you go through hundreds of queries you realize what a clich茅 this is. I know this is an amnesia story, but still. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q1: Paranormal Romance: This Little Mermaid mash-up has an intriguing pitch, but the opening pages are just one long info dump. Pass. #tenqueries

Kate Nash
@katenashagent
Literary Agent
Literary agent.
19 MSWL
223 AskAgent
33 Queries
15 Tips

Q10. Commercial fiction. Interesting setting but simply too quiet. Pass. #TenQueries

Kate Nash
@katenashagent
Literary Agent
Literary agent.
19 MSWL
223 AskAgent
33 Queries
15 Tips

Q9. Historical fiction. Looks packed full of conflict and moral ambiguities, and with a great voice, full of energy. Request! #TenQueries

Kate Nash
@katenashagent
Literary Agent
Literary agent.
19 MSWL
223 AskAgent
33 Queries
15 Tips

Q8. Commercial fiction. Writing is promising but I am not the readership (thus right agent) for this kind of family drama because the specific conflicts don't interest me. Pass. #TenQueries

Kate Nash
@katenashagent
Literary Agent
Literary agent.
19 MSWL
223 AskAgent
33 Queries
15 Tips

Q7. Historical fiction. Interesting setting in terms of parallels to present day but writing lacking voice and propulsion. Too quiet. Pass. #TenQueries