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Q5: Fantasy. This reading I give this query gives the story racial undertones, and this isn't an #ownvoices author so it doesn't quite work. Pass. #tenqueries
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Q4: Science Fiction. The premise here is interesting but it's just not speaking to me. It's a little bit dystopian in a way that I'm not really drawn to. Pass. #tenqueries
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Q3: Fantasy. I'm not sure what this is really about, the query is too concise and I have no idea what the fantasy elements are. Pass. #tenqueries
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Q2: Romance. This seems to be more Women's Fiction than Romance, and while I do consider WF, I have very specific things I'm looking for that isn't quite this. Pass. #tenqueries
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Q1: YA Fantasy. This dark fairy tale retelling has an interesting premise, but it also has a talking animal, which isn't my jam. I think if it were a fantastic creature I'd be more willing to go along with it. Pass. #tenqueries
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Q7: YA fantasy. Pacing didn鈥檛 feel consistent and I felt it was difficult to follow what was happening. Pass #tenqueries
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Q10: Science Fiction: A global pandemic eliminated the Earth's population鈥攁nd no thank you. These are not the kinds of stories I am interested in at the moment. Pass. #tenqueries
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Q9: YA Historical: I'm very selective about the historical YA I consider, and I'd say I'm most interested in feminist narratives from the late Victorian/Gilded Age/early 20th century; this isn't that. It has a male MC and is Civil War-era. Pass. #tenqueries
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Q8: YA Fantasy: The MC is 13, which puts this in MG age range, not YA. Word count is too high for MG Fantasy though. Pass. #tenqueries
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Q7: Romantic Suspense: If I can't figure out who the love interest is from the query, it's usually a sign that this isn't for me. Nor do I know what the suspense is about. Pass. #tenqueries
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Q6: MG Fantasy: This was submitted as YA, but it's MG and I don't rep MG. But even WORSE, the query is done in the MC's voice. Please don't do this, #amquering authors, it's the actual WORST. Pass. #tenqueries
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Q5: Science Fiction: This is described as tantric sci-fi. I don't know what that means. Everything I Google comes up with tantric sex & I don't think that's it, more research has me thinking it's Hindu/Buddhist ideals? I shouldn't have to think this hard abt it. Pass. #tenqueries
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Q4: Science Fiction: This was addressed to @HerringAli, oopsies! No big deal, it happens, but be careful #amquerying authors some agents may auto-reject. This one is more police procedural over science fiction, which isn't the greatest fit for me. Pass. #tenqueries
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Q3: Thriller: This was submitted as YA mystery, but I think it's actually an adult thriller, which I don't represent unless there is a strong romantic element, which I don't think this has. Pass. #tenqueries
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Q2: Historical Fantasy: MC wakes up on page 1 it's not until you go through hundreds of queries you realize what a clich茅 this is. I know this is an amnesia story, but still. Pass. #tenqueries
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Q1: Paranormal Romance: This Little Mermaid mash-up has an intriguing pitch, but the opening pages are just one long info dump. Pass. #tenqueries
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Q10. Commercial fiction. Interesting setting but simply too quiet. Pass. #TenQueries
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Q9. Historical fiction. Looks packed full of conflict and moral ambiguities, and with a great voice, full of energy. Request! #TenQueries
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Q8. Commercial fiction. Writing is promising but I am not the readership (thus right agent) for this kind of family drama because the specific conflicts don't interest me. Pass. #TenQueries
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Q7. Historical fiction. Interesting setting in terms of parallels to present day but writing lacking voice and propulsion. Too quiet. Pass. #TenQueries