Tera Cuskaden - Editor @TeraCusMake sure your queries and pages are all in the same font, font size, and text color when submitting. Little things like this can leave a subconscious negative impression. Don't give an editor/agent any reason to look at your work negatively. #RevPit #10Queries #Teaser
I should clarify, within the same document. For instance, two font sizes or two font colors in your query letter. Not that your query letter and manuscript have to be the same font. #RevPit #10queries
Make sure your queries and pages are all in the same font, font size, and text color when submitting. Little things like this can leave a subconscious negative impression. Don't give an editor/agent any reason to look at your work negatively. #RevPit #10Queries #Teaser
Q10: I'm generalizing, but sometimes concepts like falling stars (star becomes person), genies, etc. are hard to conceptualize. When you try to explain in query, it gets confusing. I've seen several today, so not just this query, but not following how this works. Pass. #10queries
Q9: When queries are super long, I get bogged down in details. Still, I read the sample, but didn't connect with the writing. If you can get a high-concept pitch in a query--where you distill the plot & essence of a story into 1 (or 2) simple sentence(s), do it. Pass. #10queries
Q5: Super commercial dark fantasy MG that deals with loss which is nice to see in middle grade since kids this age are learning to tackle those tough subjects. High stakes and the title's to die for. This is literally what I see editors asking for. REQUEST. #10queries
Q4: I'm going to pass on this one. The dialog doesn't feel authentic in what is supposed to be a chaotic first scene. You can get a good emotional response from strong dialog, so take advantage of your character's words! #10queries
Q3: Pass. Query doesn't lay out much in the way of a plot arc so I'm not sure what's going to happen. Word count is also super high for a debut. I'm kind of sad though because it touched on material I generally love. #10queries
Q2: I know several editors who like it when an author plays with structure, but I'm not connecting with the way this one's organized--even though the concept is interesting. I'm looking for an active engaging scene to hook me in the first pages. Pass. #10queries
Q1: Torn on this one. Good hook, but similar to what's already out there. Clearly talented writer. Distinct voice across multiple points of view. Pass, but will ask to see other work as they mentioned they write in multiple genres. #10queries
P10 - MG F 🥗
Wanted to put on Maybe list but voice feels too young for me. Good first line but some details need to be clarified earlier on (unknown family members popped in at random).
Like it, but not sure writing is strong enough to fully flesh out plot. #RevPit #10queries
Q10 - MG Fantasy
Good way to illustrate dark, unique retelling.
Digging the plot, but the end paragraphs make the stakes fall flat. More specifics might help solidify story progression. Also questioning the need for multi-POV.
P9 - YA ?? 🥗
Pages are filled w/ explanations & telling language. Gives a character sketch of character rather than naturally letting us learn this as the story continues.
Voice is ok, but not strong enough yet to hook. Good place to open story, though. #RevPit #10queries
Q9 - YA ??
Genre is unclear/query specifies odd mix of genres. Maybe contemporary w/ thriller elements?
First para can be condensed, but definitely intrigues me w/ setting/conflict. Stakes are left flat, though, and unsure how secondary character plays role.