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Q6. Commercial fiction. The concept and synopsis lacks emotional depth, reads more like a caper. Pass. #TenQueries
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Q5. Crime. A little short, more of a novella, but love the realism in the opening, the concept and Northern England setting. Request. #TenQueries
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Q4. Crime thriller. Writer describes this as psychological thriller but I don't think so. Needs more of a concept and character emotional depth. Pass. #TenQueries
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Q3. Historical crime. Writing competent but not excited by the synopsis. Pass. #TenQueries
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Q2. Indecipherable genre. Couldn't work out what this novel was about or what it wanted to be. Pass. #TenQueries
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Going to do #TenQueries this morning. Here's the first:
Q1. Commercial fiction. Held my breath while reading the opening scene so this is a cert to request!
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Q10: Contemporary Fiction: This LGBTQ story is like an extended flashback. I am just not a fan of flashbacks. Or second-chance romances. So this isn't a good fit. Pass. #tenqueries
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Q9: YA Contemporary: I love the #ownvoices elements here, disability rep and music, and I'm pretty much sold. Full Request. #tenqueries
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Q8: Historical Romance: This one has a surprise pregnancy which is not my favorite storyline in romances. Pass. #tenqueries
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Q7: Science Fiction: Again this is a query where the stakes are...I don't know? I need to have a sense of the character's GMC and none of these queries today are conveying that properly. Pass. #tenqueries
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Q6: Fantasy: I'm just not feeling the stakes in this one. The entire conflict doesn't sound that bad? Pass. #tenqueries
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Q5: Contemporary YA/Mystery: Something about the voice here isn't grabbing me, I don't feel compelled to keep reading. Pass. #tenqueries
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Q4: YA Fantasy: This one uses Latinx/Incan mythology & the author informs me that they are white. Which I appreciate because I don't have to try to identity police the author. But again, the sensitivities about #ownvoices are such that I don't want to risk this. Pass. #tenqueries
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Q3: Fantasy: This novel uses Native American mythology, but I can't tell if it's #ownvoices for that or for mental health issues. The pitch implies it's the latter. With all the sensitivities around representation, this is a risk I don't want to take. Pass. #tenqueries
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Q2: Contemporary Fiction: This is also too long for contemporary fiction, at 175K it needs to lose about 90K words to be in range. Pass. #tenqueries
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Q1: Science Fiction. Oooh boy. This is nearly twice the length it should be at 230K. And it has two sequels. For word count reasons; Pass. #tenqueries
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Q6: YA UF. Lots of exposition and the pacing felt a bit rushed. Pass #tenqueries
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Q5: Sci-fi? I don’t feel this project is a good fit for me. Pass #tenqueries
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Q4: YA fantasy (dystopian). I liked the premise, but the pages just didn’t grab my attention. I felt the world bulding could use much more development. Pass #tenqueries
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Q3: Romance. I felt the pages had a unique voice. Request #tenqueries