
Literary Agent
Q14: YA Contemp. Very solid query (hook, voice, comp titles), but the dialogue in the writing lacked authenticity. Pass. #tenqueries

Literary Agent
Q13: Manuscript was written and completed a month ago. Um...it's not ready yet. Get some feedback and edits! Pass. #tenqueries

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Q12: A Literary. All about the author, nothing about the manuscript. Did not follow guidelines. Pass. #tenqueries

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Q11: PB. Obviously submitted to more than one agent in the email, + attachment + the email talked about author, no query. Pass. #tenqueries

Literary Agent
Q10: A Contemp. Premise was intriguing, but writing sample was more telling than showing. Pass. #tenqueries

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Q9: YA Fantasy. A Shakespeare play meets Outlander. Intriguing! Partial. #tenqueries #querywin

Literary Agent
Q8: YA contemp. 5 paragraphs about the author, 2 sentences on the project. Writing needs some critique partner feedback. Pass. #tenqueries

Literary Agent
Q7: Submitted four different novels in the span of an hour. Very "here you go" in query style. All pass. #tenqueries

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Q6: Nonfic. Multiple submission with links and attachments. Pass. #tenqueries

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Q5: A/YA/MG (?) Fantasy. Comp titles all over. Animal POV. I'm really not the agent to go to if you have animal MCs. Pass. #tenqueries

Literary Agent
Q4: YA contemp. Very pressing matters in today's social climate, + great writing & excellent opening chapters. Partial #tenqueries #querywin

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Q3: YA Fantasy. Change the names/location of DAUGHTER OF SMOKE AND BONE and that was this. Any way to make this unique? Pass. #tenqueries

Literary Agent
Q2: A HF. The premise was okay, and the writing so-so, but this era and topic is (VERY unfortunately) not sellable. Pass. #tenqueries

Literary Agent
Q1: YA Fantasy. Chosen One & Superhero theme, mysterious abilities @ 16. Writing style/voice for MG. Needs to stand out! Pass. #tenqueries

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Laura Zats @LZats
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