Q2: Over-narrates characters’ thoughts, so they feel convoluted & clunky. Don’t get a sense of the voice or characters. Pass. #10queries

Q1: Query describes overall mission for writing the book, but doesn’t describe plot or even name the genre. Pass. #10queries

So I've compiled these #10queries over a period of time. These are not the queries I'm reading today.

Q10: Interesting premise but the book isn't finished. Too bad. Pass. #10queries

Q9: Another screenplay. Pass. #10queries

Q8: Unrequested synopsis and no query letter. Pass. #10queries

Q7: Interesting premise but not for me. Something just didn't click. :( #10queries

Q6: Query is right on the money, great platform, and the writer knows my buzzwords. Request! #10queries

Q5: Fun idea for a PB but plot not developed enough so will need to pass. #10queries

Q4: Less of a query than a writer trying to feel out if their ideas would make a book. Pass. #10queries

Q3: Promises of a lot of money when we sell the screenplay even though I'm not a film agent. Teeeempting--but no. #10queries

Q2: A little heavy on the "message" and a theme that has been done many times before for middle grade. Pass.

Q1: Well written query -- but not in my representative categories so will pass.