Jordy Albert

Q1: Children's (chapter book?). I didn't fall in love with the writing; there was a lot of telling v. showing. Pass. #tenqueries

Q10: MG fantasy. I had trouble believing certain things that happened, so it was a little off-putting. Pass. #tenqueries

Q9: MG/YA contemporary or fantasy I'm not sure. I didn't connect with the voice. Pass. #tenqueries

Q8: YA contemp. I was a little put off by the description in the query; wasn't my cup of tea. Pass. #tenqueries

Q7: Historical Western Romance. This one wasn't really my cup of tea. Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: Historical Rom. The way the accent was written was distracting and took away from the story. It was too over the top. Pass. #tenqueries

Q5: Adult Fiction. I'm not really looking for political thrillers at this time. Pass. #tenqueries

Q4: PB. Query doesn't offer much information, and there are no sample pages. Pass. #tenqueries

Q3: Author sent about half a dozen queries for different projects. Pass. #tenqueries

Q2: YA Fantasy. I didn't really connect with the characters. Pass. #tenqueries

Q1: Query requests help selling film rights. #tenqueries PASS.

Q10: MG contemporary. Undecided on premise. A few characters are introduced at once, so it was tough to connect. Maybe #tenqueries

Q9: YA fantasy. Interesting premise. I felt thrown into the story-pages need a bit more world building. Pass #tenqueries

Q8: YA historical. Premise wasn't my cup of tea. Word count is long for YA. Pass #tenqueries

Q7: Query was confusing. Pages jumped to different chapters. Premise wasn't my cup of tea. Pass #tenqueries

Q6: YA fantasy. I wasn't 100% sold on the premise, and the pages didn't pull me in. Pass #tenqueries

Q5: YA? Thriller-Fantasy. Q is about 3 sentences long, so I'm not 100% what it's about. Pages didn't pull me in. Pass #tenqueries

Q4: YA historical. Query is vague. Pages didn't pull me in-too much telling. Pass #tenqueries

Q3: PN. Query seemed to be written from Character POV. Don't feel like I have a strong enough idea of the story. No pages. Pass #tenqueries

Q2: MG Contemporary. The premise really didn't appeal to me, and there were no sample pages included. Pass #tenqueries