Laura Zats

Q159: YA. Mysterious boy, mysterious house, special girl. *yawn* #500queries

Q157: YA F. EXCELLENT query, but the concept isn't grabbing me like I want. Pass. #500queries

Q156: A cross between TWILIGHT and VAMPIRE ACADEMY? My! How you know my tastes! #pass #500queries

Q155: 220k horror. I don't rep straight horror. Also, tl;dr #500queries

Q153: I don't care how good your idea is, or what your credits are. If you give me a synopsis/chapter instead of a query, I pass #500queries

Q152: C Rom. Instead of selling the book, the query covers how the authors got the idea FOR the book. Bad. Wrong. Pass. #500queries

Q151: C fantasy MG. Too cutesy for me. #500queries

Q150: 20k C MG. Too short, and not believable. #500queries

Q149: YA Para Rom. Normal girl, supernatural being who loves her. Pass. #500queries

Q147: Diverse UF. Loving the characters, but the story is not catching me. #500queries

Q146: Action film. #lolwhut? LITERARY is the key word. #500queries

Q145: Mass email, logline in subject matter #pass #500queries

Q144: C YA. Cool setting but meh. Kinda vague. #500queries

Q143: ANOTHER CARNIVAL BOOK! CYA. Good, but I don't love this one. The supporting characters are lacking. #500queries #partial

Q142: YA thriller. Voice just isn't catching me. A little too telly I think. #partial #500queries

Q141: YA magical realism. Awesome story, but voice is too internal, and thee's no world building. Pass. #500queries #partial

Q140: UF. Good voice, but not enough world building, so the story isn't carried along well. Pass. #500queries #partial

Q139: YA SF. Action is super confusing, and there's no world building. Pass. #500queries #partial

#138: YA UF. Voice is well-formed, but there's not enough gravity to temper the snark. Pass. #partial #500queries

#136: YA F. Doesn't feel YA, and not enough world building #partial #500queries