Laura Zats

Q300: C WF/Romance. Love the voice, but the story has WAY too much going on, and one too manny suitors #full #500queries

Q299: YA SF/ Really well-written, but I didn't NEED to keep reading after three chapters. #partial #500queries

Q298: YA SF. Awesome premise, but the actions is very, very confusing #partial #500queries

Q297: MG F. Awesome stories, but the POV isn't nearly close enough, so it doesn't feel MG. #partial #500queries

Q296: also erotica. Well-written, but it's just not toe-curling. #partial #500queries

Q295: Erotica. All banter, no set up, or dialogue tags. No. #partial #500queries

Q293: C NA. Narration trying to be snarky/smart, only achieves being very, VERY telly #partial #500queries

Q292: YA F. Action and the MC's reaction to it isn't believable--most likely because of a lack of world building #partial #500queries

Q291:if you're querying, DON'T use an email shared w/ your spouse. It makes me scared you won't be able to handle social media. #500queries

Q290: YA distopian. Meh. #500queries

Q289: #pubtip: don't name your SF alien race after the slang for a naughty part #500queries

Q288: Child soldiers are ALSO not my bag. #500queries

Q287: Gold diggers are not my bag, baby. #500queries

Q286: Weirdest query in months. Written in the third person, as if the author was ALSO a early reader of the novel. #lolwhut #500queries

Q285: Using the supernatural to "symbolize uniquely human conflicts"? You don't say! *headdesk* #500queries

Q284: multiple, prescriptive kids books in one query. No on so many levels. #500queries

Q283: SF. Claimed comp to OUTLANDER instead of BIG. It's ok to comp to what the book is ACTUALLY like, and not just trending. #500queries

Q282: It is Vague Day again here at Red Sofa. Specfics get you agents, folks .#500queries

Q281: Interesting WF, but not in my wheelhouse. Pass #500queries

Q280: If you self-pub, that's your first and only shot for that idea. You can't go from indie to trad. Agents want new ideas. #500queries