Laura Zats

Q364: MG that was perfectly fine, but not quite hook-y enough for me. #500queries

Q362: I don’t think I’m the only agent who really, really hates when writers stretch to fit ALL my MSWL requests in their book. It doesn’t fit. That’s okay. Pass. #500queries

Q360: YA F that had a good premise but the plot goes a bit left, so it lost me. Pass. #500queries

Q359: Not complete MS. Pass. #500queries

Q358: F. Not bad; a little repetitive, and not for me. Pass. #500queries

Q357: This SF is just a touch too vague. Pass. #500queries

Q356: Query in attachment. Did not read. Pass. #500queries

Q355: Portal fantasies need to be really special for me to bite. This wasn’t. Pass. #500queries

Q354: Superheroes. As far as queries go, this is a good one, but the market is pretty well saturated. Pass. #500queries

Q353: Sorry, but it just weirds me out when you give your MS a gender and a personality. Pass. #500queries

Q352: Not addressed to me. Pass. #500queries

Q351: I’m a bit confused by this F. Either way, it’s too long. Pass. #500queries

Q350: Boring superpower pitch. Pass. #500queries

Q349: I was into this until we got to “allegory”. Pass. #500queries

Q348: Gen fic. Still don’t rep it. Pass. #500queries

Q347: This alien book was ALMOST there--just focused on the wrong things. Pass. #500queries

Q346: Gen fic. Def do not rep. Pass. #500queries

Q345: YA is too general, with no hook. Pass. #500queries

Q344: Nothing wrong with this F, but I just didn’t love it. Pass. #500queries

Q343: I wish the author of this SF was less interested in themes and more interested in story. Pass. #500queries