BREAKING BEAUTIFUL by @jenniferswolf opens with wake up scene (for good reason). So, waking up isn't a deal breaker if it's relevant #pubtip

#PubTip = Opening pages with someone waking up can feel generic. Of 25 sample page submissions this weekend, 9 opened with wake up scenes.

If you Q via a mass mailing of agents, don't be surprised at the lack of response.#pubtip

Your comps don't have to be books. You can use TV and movies, too. Anything that isn't forced and gives us an image works. #Pubtip

“You want to create relationships. That’s the best way to sell your book.” - @Kerrie_Flanagan #PPWC2014 #pubtip

Most agents don't expect exclusive queries, but if you use EXCLUSIVE QUERY in your subject, don't use Dear Sir/Madam. #queryquotes #querytip

#querytip We remember serial submitters. Don't just fire another MS off the moment an agent rejects the first one.

#querytip we do respond to every query sent to queries@ldlainc.com. We do not fill out forms to prove we are not spam.

#pubtip: R+Rs should prompt an entire revision, not just a change of the things an agent mentioned.

Double-check your query letter to be sure you've changed the addressee to the right person. #querytip

#querytip With a good query, some thoughts that race through my mind are: "Oh! (Name of editor) at (name of publisher) will like this!"

#querytip As a young agent, with the importance of building my list, I tend to have a narrow focus on the certain projects I take on.

#querytip Sometimes I pass on projects that I think are good and sellable, but I know I'm not the right advocate for it.

#querytip I'm seeing a lot of storylines that have too much build-up. Try to jump right into the tension of the story.

#querytip I will comb through my query inbox and star anything that simply looks good just by the subject line.

#querytip Don't be afraid to personalize your query for the agents you want. Make sure it's short and sweet.

#querytip Think of a strong title for your project and subject your query email with the title in all CAPS.

#querytip How unique is your main character?

#PubTip (really more of a Pub Suggestion) = before spending money on promo, vet your budget with your agent. #agenting

#querytip No filters on your submissions email account. It keeps me from requesting your work.