Kate Nash
@katenashagent
Literary Agent
Literary agent.
19 MSWL
223 AskAgent
33 Queries
15 Tips

Q2. Indecipherable genre. Couldn't work out what this novel was about or what it wanted to be. Pass. #TenQueries

Kate Nash
@katenashagent
Literary Agent
Literary agent.
19 MSWL
223 AskAgent
33 Queries
15 Tips

Going to do #TenQueries this morning. Here's the first:

Q1. Commercial fiction. Held my breath while reading the opening scene so this is a cert to request!

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q10: Contemporary Fiction: This LGBTQ story is like an extended flashback. I am just not a fan of flashbacks. Or second-chance romances. So this isn't a good fit. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q9: YA Contemporary: I love the #ownvoices elements here, disability rep and music, and I'm pretty much sold. Full Request. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q8: Historical Romance: This one has a surprise pregnancy which is not my favorite storyline in romances. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q7: Science Fiction: Again this is a query where the stakes are...I don't know? I need to have a sense of the character's GMC and none of these queries today are conveying that properly. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q6: Fantasy: I'm just not feeling the stakes in this one. The entire conflict doesn't sound that bad? Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q5: Contemporary YA/Mystery: Something about the voice here isn't grabbing me, I don't feel compelled to keep reading. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q4: YA Fantasy: This one uses Latinx/Incan mythology & the author informs me that they are white. Which I appreciate because I don't have to try to identity police the author. But again, the sensitivities about #ownvoices are such that I don't want to risk this. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q3: Fantasy: This novel uses Native American mythology, but I can't tell if it's #ownvoices for that or for mental health issues. The pitch implies it's the latter. With all the sensitivities around representation, this is a risk I don't want to take. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q2: Contemporary Fiction: This is also too long for contemporary fiction, at 175K it needs to lose about 90K words to be in range. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q1: Science Fiction. Oooh boy. This is nearly twice the length it should be at 230K. And it has two sequels. For word count reasons; Pass. #tenqueries

Jordy Albert
@bluedragonfly81
Literary Agent
Literary Agent @BookerAlbertLit | Lover of dogs, books, and tea. Total fangirl. #mugiwarapirates #worldpeace
20 MSWL
1 AskAgent
341 Queries
24 Tips

Q6: YA UF. Lots of exposition and the pacing felt a bit rushed. Pass #tenqueries

Jordy Albert
@bluedragonfly81
Literary Agent
Literary Agent @BookerAlbertLit | Lover of dogs, books, and tea. Total fangirl. #mugiwarapirates #worldpeace
20 MSWL
1 AskAgent
341 Queries
24 Tips

Q5: Sci-fi? I don鈥檛 feel this project is a good fit for me. Pass #tenqueries

Jordy Albert
@bluedragonfly81
Literary Agent
Literary Agent @BookerAlbertLit | Lover of dogs, books, and tea. Total fangirl. #mugiwarapirates #worldpeace
20 MSWL
1 AskAgent
341 Queries
24 Tips

Q4: YA fantasy (dystopian). I liked the premise, but the pages just didn鈥檛 grab my attention. I felt the world bulding could use much more development. Pass #tenqueries

Jordy Albert
@bluedragonfly81
Literary Agent
Literary Agent @BookerAlbertLit | Lover of dogs, books, and tea. Total fangirl. #mugiwarapirates #worldpeace
20 MSWL
1 AskAgent
341 Queries
24 Tips

Q3: Romance. I felt the pages had a unique voice. Request #tenqueries

Jordy Albert
@bluedragonfly81
Literary Agent
Literary Agent @BookerAlbertLit | Lover of dogs, books, and tea. Total fangirl. #mugiwarapirates #worldpeace
20 MSWL
1 AskAgent
341 Queries
24 Tips

Q2: Fantasy. The first page didn鈥檛 really pull me in. I didn鈥檛 connect with the MC or voice. Pass #tenqueries

Jordy Albert
@bluedragonfly81
Literary Agent
Literary Agent @BookerAlbertLit | Lover of dogs, books, and tea. Total fangirl. #mugiwarapirates #worldpeace
20 MSWL
1 AskAgent
341 Queries
24 Tips

Q1: YA fantasy. The query doesn鈥檛 offer any information about the actual novel. Pages were included as attachments. Please always be sure to check agent guidelines when querying. Pass #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q10: Thriller. This isn't really a genre I represent without strong romantic elements. But it also has cops as murderers and sexual harassers and it's too on the nose for me. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q9: Historical Fiction. This is like Midnight Sun for Pride & Prejudice, but honestly, it asks questions I've never had much interest in. Pass. #tenqueries