Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q8: YA Fantasy. The word count on this one is too high, but it's also got spiritual elements that do not work for me. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q7: Fantasy Romance. This one reads like an alien romance to me, which I am not a great fit for. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q6: Contemporary Romance. The power dynamics in play here are concerning, not in the typical way, but still concerning at least to me. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q5: YA Fantasy. This one starts out with a non-YA POV, and is actually a character not named in the pitch, which doesn't generally work in YA. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q4: Upmarket WF. I'm worried that this might need some sensitivity reads, and I'm probably not the best agent for this, even though it certainly has elements I like. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q3: YA Contemporary. I love a good road trip story, but all the ones in my inbox are for depressing reasons. Where are my fun-filled joyous road trips at? Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q2: Urban Fantasy. This one is dragons and demons and magic, which also sounds really fun, but this also has a murderer on the loose and I think I just want something different. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q1: YA Fantasy. This has vampires and boarding school and it all sounds really fun, but something about it isn't grabbing me. It might be the serial killer. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q10: Paranormal Romance. I know vampires are supposed to be making a comeback, but the pitch for this one doesn't feel fresh enough to me. Pass. #tenqueries.

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q9: Contemporary Romance. This takes place in Iceland. For all that I hate cold weather for me, I love reading stories set in remote, wintry places. Listen, I can't explain it either. Full Request. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q8: Honestly I don't know what this is. The author submitted under Fantasy. But it's about medication? And whether or not a cure for stress will be found? And it's not even 10,000 words? Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q7: Contemporary Romance. And, yet another word count pass. This has the opposite problem. At close to 150,000 words it's nearly twice the length of the average Contemporary Romance. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q6: YA Sci-Fi. Another easy pass due to word count. This one is 44,000 words, but YA Sci-Fi tends to average word counts in the 90,000-100,000 word range. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q5: YA Fantasy. This one is an easy pass due to word count. At 25,000 words, it's too short to count as a completed work in YA fantasy, which tend to average 90,000 words. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q4: YA Contemporary. Last one from May. This has some great #ownvoices rep, and I want to love. But I struggle with younger YA, and the opening scene makes gives me more MG vibes than YA which makes me think I'm not the right fit. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q3: YA Fantasy. Going through the last of my May queries. Reading through the opening pages, I'm drawn to the aerialist MC and her Parisian dreams, I want to keep reading. Full Request. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q2: Fantasy. Also have been sitting on this one. Same issues really. Love the comps/pitch, but a close read of the opening pages has me concerned about the world-building, and the author's ability to effectively describe action sequences. Pass. #tenqueries

Eva Scalzo
@evascalzo
Literary Agent
a boricua馃嚨馃嚪 who has never met a tangent she wouldn鈥檛 follow | lit agent @ Speilburg Literary | AALA & SCBWI | she/her/ella/ms. | links in bio
89 MSWL
444 Queries
39 Tips

Q1: Fantasy. I've been debating this one for a while. I like the pitch, I like the voice, but where this story starts, & where it's going to go...I'm just not sure I'm invested in the journey. It's hard to say no, but sometimes that's better than my indecision. Pass. #tenqueries

Sharon Belcastro
@SharonBelcastro
Literary Agent
Introvert surviving in an extroverted world. Lover of books, animals, plants, the beach, working out and eating tacos. @belcastr
52 MSWL
50 Queries
17 Tips

#10 Fantastic log line! Appreciate an author that can grab interest in their story in a few words. Unfortunately, market and genre not represented by anyone in the agency.

Sharon Belcastro
@SharonBelcastro
Literary Agent
Introvert surviving in an extroverted world. Lover of books, animals, plants, the beach, working out and eating tacos. @belcastr
52 MSWL
50 Queries
17 Tips

#9 Adult fiction. Don't represent. Word count is way too high. Won't even read to see if a colleague may be interested. Know your genre.