Q3: YA fantasy. The premise feels too familiar. And the POV changes a lot, so it was difficult to connect w/characters. Pass. #tenqueries

Q2: Historical Romance. I like the premise, but the pages just seemed to move too fast. Didn't get drawn into the story. Pass #tenqueries

Q1: MG fantasy. The premise isn't for me. Pass #tenqueries

Q10: A "true" story sold a SF because it's too crazy to be believed. Query is also thousands of words long. Crackpot vibes. Pass #tenqueries

Q9: Supernatural NA. Has romance, but focuses on some really interesting issues of internal/external identity. Req partial #tenqueries

Q8: YA. Lots of typos and plot is confusing. Pass. #tenqueries

Q7: Supernatural YA rom. A little didactic and doesn't have much other plot. Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: 170K High F. Gives me oveview, but no characters so no reason to care and distinguish it from other epic fantasy. Pass. #tenqueries

Q5: YA SF. I'm waffling. Seems like the best version of a common story, but there are so many other queries I love more, so pass #tenqueries

Q4: F YA, but a bit too short and doesn't quite grab me. Pass. #tenqueries

Q3: Premise is excellent, but the query itself is confusing, Most likely the prose won't be clear or readable. Pass. #tenqueries

Q2: Called me agent and confused synopsis and query letter. Also asked me a question for a log line (I hate that). Pass. #tenqueries

Q1: Sounds fun, but has zombies, which are really hard to sell now. Pass. #tenqueries

Bonus 2: QUILTBAG YA (which I love), but I don't get a real sense of conflict from the query. Pass. #tenqueries

Bonus 1: Ugh. Written in 2nd again. Para romance, and it's 2x longer than it should be. Pass #tenqueries

Q10: UF with silly spellings that don't achieve anything. Premise isn't bad, but not interesting or quriky enough for me. Pass. #tenqueries

Q9: kick-ass log line. F with really interesting way for the MC to explore her identity. Request partial #tenqueries

Q8: high F, a LOT going on and query doesn't take the time to orient the reader. Pass. #tenqueries

Q7: very well written, and author has a wonderful platform, but the project is has hints of colonialism and racism. Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: Good concept and well-written, but it's a straight YA romance, which I'm not really looking for atm. Pass. #tenqueries