
Literary Agent
Maria, Maria 🎶 @msmariavicente
61. MG Fantasy. There is so much going on in this query. Every sentence throws another twist out there. Too chaotic. #100QueriesAlso: "Chaotic" by Britney Spears just happened to be playing on my iTunes. Coincidence? I think not. Queen Britney knows all. #100Queries

Literary Agent
Maria, Maria 🎶 @msmariavicente
61. MG Fantasy. There is so much going on in this query. Every sentence throws another twist out there. Too chaotic. #100QueriesSometimes you need to hold on to some plot ideas for future books. #100Queries

Literary Agent
61. MG Fantasy. There is so much going on in this query. Every sentence throws another twist out there. Too chaotic. #100Queries

Literary Agent
Q190: MG. Very STEM-y and fun. REQ! #500queries

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Q189: Good concept romance, but I'm very picky about suspence in my R, and this one didn't do it for me. #500queries

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Q188: Retelling that was a teeny bit too traditional for my taste. Not right fo me, but I bet it'll be snatched up soon! #500queries

Literary Agent
Q187: Sweet MG. Pass! #500queries

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Literary Agent
Q186: FINALLY. A romance novel with a new hook! Request! #500queries

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Ana Franco @anathebookworm
@MsMariaVicente you wouldn't consider a work that has already been self published, then? :/@anathebookworm There's not much an agent can do with a previously self-published book. You're better of querying something new. #100Queries

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laura do tuíter @onlybyLaura
@MsMariaVicente What makes a retelling original, since the market seems to be flooded with them?@onlybyLaura Just something that hasn't been done before! #100Queries

Literary Agent
60. Adult Thriller/Crime. Not my thing. #100Queries

Literary Agent
59. YA Retelling. The plot sounds exactly like the original. I like retellings, but there needs to be a new spin. #100Queries

Literary Agent
Darshana Khiani @darshanakhiani
@MsMariaVicente or are you saying 80's details are lacking? (2/2) thanks!@darshanakhiani The query made it seem arbitrarily set in the 1980's. Maybe the query needed more work, not necessarily the MS? #100Queries

Literary Agent
58. YA Fantasy. Not reading anything new here. I need to read a truly original premise to be intrigued. #100Queries

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10. MG soccer story. Cute but not exactly my thing, and the writing is somewhat lacking in finesse. #tenqueries

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57. New Adult. I don’t rep this. #100Queries

Literary Agent
56. Literary Fiction. Already self-published. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ #100Queries

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Coach Blair Redd @brgredd
@MsMariaVicente are you just randomly answering emails via Twitter?@brgredd Just sharing a few thoughts on some query letters. Not actually responding to emails haha. #100Queries

Literary Agent
55. YA Paranormal. Regardless of my reservations about paranormal stories, this manuscript is still a work-in-progress. #100Queries


