Q53: No genre given. Prose in the sample very good, but I'm confused by the query. Not sure what to make of it. Nice pass. #millionqueries

Q52 did not follow submission guidelines. #millionqueries

Q51: High Fantasy. Fresh concept and synopsis, but the writing just didn't grab me. Nice pass. #millionqueries

Q8-10: These queries, like a couple of others I already tweeted about, didn't follow guidelines. Pass :( #tenqueries

Q7: MG contemporary. The pages were a bit slow, so unfortunately didn't hold my interest. Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: MG. Didn't connect with the main characters. Pass. #tenqueries

Q5: Didn't follow guidelines. No sample pages. Pass. #tenqueries

Q4: Didn't follow guidelines. No query. Pass. #tenqueries

Q3: Query for poetry. I’m not representing poetry at this time. Pass. #tenqueries

Q2: YA/fantasy. Didn’t get caught up in the pages. Pass. #tenqueries

Q1: MG (fantasy?) Way too long. Could be about 4 MG books. Pass #tenqueries

#tenqueries complete. Takeaway: I am still looking for great, smart MG and YA. I love realistic, but I also love to be surprised. Try me!

Q10: Pass. Love the premise, but the writing rushed through opening scenes so fast that it was hard to follow & feel invested. #tenqueries

Q9: Pass. An interesting premise & strong credentials but the voice is too flowery. Adjective:noun ratio is too high! #tenqueries

Q8: Pass. MG mouse book. There are so many mouse hero books & MSs, and this one’s premise just didn’t stand out enough. #tenqueries

Q7: Request. Strong YA contemporary with great dialogue and compelling MC. Some small issues in opening but want to read more! #tenqueries

Q6: Pass. MG historical. I’d love a literary MG historical, but the slice of history explored has to be new or have a new angle. #tenqueries

Q5: Pass. YA fantasy – I only like very accessible fantasy & this just felt too genre for my taste. Voice didn't pull me in. #tenqueries

Q4: Pass. The self-described allegorical novel & after reading the pitch I have NO idea what the story is actually about. #tenqueries

Q10: PB Pitch well written. It didn't grab me but the underlying message is promising. Will forward to @TheWriteShadow #tenqueries